[Cinematics] The Knights of the Round Table

[Knight7770]

In the last scene, what about stuff like the knight turning as when he talks to Launcelot

Don't they already turn to face each-other?

or walking up to his fathers grave when he's talking about his death?

I could show them walking :thup:

 

[Dakho]

While I appreciate your dedication to the old english, some of it seems a little forced, with a bit too much thees and thous and shalts. Also, there's really not much going on. The characters go walk to some place and the camera just sits there as they talk, and they go off.

However, it still was interesting. The terrain was well done, and the story seems to flow well. The plot doesn't feel forced or complicated, and overall it's pretty good, though, as someone else said, the cinematic is a bit too plain. Just a little movement and different camera angles would really spice it up.

 

[thewrongvine]

While I appreciate your dedication to the old english, some of it seems a little forced, with a bit too much thees and thous and shalts. Also, there's really not much going on. The characters go walk to some place and the camera just sits there as they talk, and they go off.

However, it still was interesting. The terrain was well done, and the story seems to flow well. The plot doesn't feel forced or complicated, and overall it's pretty good, though, as someone else said, the cinematic is a bit too plain. Just a little movement and different camera angles would really spice it up.

Yes, Knight, exactly what I told you. -_-

Make it kewler so we can have more Lancelot pwnageness... though I hate him...

 

[Knight7770]

Yes, Knight, exactly what I told you. -_-

I'll fix the Olde English at my discretion.

Make it kewler so we can have more Lancelot pwnageness... though I hate him...

The "pwnage" fight hasn't even been released yet; I'm too busy grading stuff for the Hero contest
How dare you hate Sir Launcelot of the Lake! He will "pwn" you!!!

 

[Skitz_24]

Sir Launcelot, Sir Shmauncelot

I think you need to fix the timing a bit, as near the beginning text only stayed sometimes for like half a second and I was left with a blank bar at the bottom

I agree on that you are trying too hard with Ye Olde English Language.

And another thing...right now I am getting this sort of repetitiveness from Launcelot...

"I am looking for an adventure, and I am seeking an adventure because adventures are what make me proud to be a knight because in adventures I can accomplish things and use up all of my free time"

If you get my drift

 

[Knight7770]

And another thing...right now I am getting this sort of repetitiveness from Launcelot...

"I am looking for an adventure, and I am seeking an adventure because adventures are what make me proud to be a knight because in adventures I can accomplish things and use up all of my free time"

If you get my drift

What do you mean?

 

[Skitz_24]

Launcelot mentions having an adventure too much.

I mean he walks into a burning village and the first thing he says is "Where can I find some adventure" =\

You would think as a knight of the Round Table (btw, Table Round...wtf?) he would b more like "What happened here? Are there any survivors? Should I go get help?"

 

[Knight7770]

Launcelot mentions having an adventure too much.

I mean he walks into a burning village and the first thing he says is "Where can I find some adventure" =\

You would think as a knight of the Round Table (btw, Table Round...wtf?) he would b more like "What happened here? Are there any survivors? Should I go get help?"

So you think it should go more like this:
"Hail, good sir knight!"
"Hail, squire. I see that there has been a fire hereabouts."
"'Tis rather obvious that there hath been a fire."
"Fine, fine. If you don't want my help, I shall not give it to thou."
"Fine."
"Fine."
"Fine."
"Great!"
"Great!"
etc...

 

[Skitz_24]

lol

No I think it should be soemthing more along the lines of...

*Launcelot wanders through village*
"Hello? Be there anyone still alive?"
*soldiers runs forward*
"Oh good sir knight, thank goodness you have come, as thou cans't see, our village has been set aflame, and we are in great need of help."
"Lead the way good Squire"

...etc.

Get it now?

 

[Knight7770]

lol

No I think it should be soemthing more along the lines of...

*Launcelot wanders through village*
"Hello? Be there anyone still alive?"
*soldiers runs forward*
"Oh good sir knight, thank goodness you have come, as thou cans't see, our village has been set aflame, and we are in great need of help."
"Lead the way good Squire"

...etc.

Get it now?

I got it the first time; I just felt like having some fun
Maybe I would be better suited to make something more along the lines of Monty Python and the Holy Grail?

 

[Skitz_24]

Ya, you know your Monty Python music fit in well

 

[Knight7770]

Ya, you know your Monty Python music fit in well

Thanks :thup:
I guess I'll just finish this one up, then the rest can be comedic :thup:

 

[Skitz_24]

You know...you do have the 'Black Knight' to get rid of

 

[Knight7770]

You know...you do have the 'Black Knight' to get rid of

What do you think of a large meteor hitting his castle and killing him?

 

[Skitz_24]

Are you kidding me? The black knight can't be killed!!! After all, it is 'only a flesh wound'

 

[Knight7770]

Are you kidding me? The black knight can't be killed!!! After all, it is 'only a flesh wound'

My brain just hatched an idea!!! :thup:
Thanks :thup:

 

[Skitz_24]

I better get credited for sparking this brilliant idea >__>

 

[Kazuga]

Good camera, nice terrain, real good story (as expected from you Knight^^). Can't turn out to be anything else but great?:thup:

 

[Knight7770]

Good camera, nice terrain, real good story (as expected from you Knight^^). Can't turn out to be anything else but great?:thup:

Thanks :thup:

 

[Daskunk]

Terrian is pretty blank..
The storyline isn't bad, but It didnt seem that interesting either.. o.0
Needs work.. The cemeras are pretty good, but at one point its partly off the map showing blackness. I agree you over did some of the Old english talking, too.