IceWarrior98
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- Reaction score
- 12
After watching it I feel I can give some good criticism.
To start, the wordings...were very strange. I know it is old english but i'm not so sure even you understood the use of them very well.
The battles were lacking in any eye candy. Both of them had no real action, just units attacking units.
The ending was helarious only because I saw the movie that came up with it, Monty Python and the Holy Grail.
The pathways the characters ran through were a bit long and made me loose interest quite easily. You should have done something such as camera panning and better doodad placements to make it seem less uniform.
I suggest you improve on these should you work on another cinematic. When people watch these they don't want to see Warcraft, they want to see the world you put them in, and that includes more controlled battles. Instead of stab stab death death, have an actual fight. Running, hitting, casting (if thats their thing). Not just running up and attacking. No one does that.
Also, soundtrack. It could have used alot more sounds to make it more interesting and provide a better feel for the timeline and environment. Through the entire thing I only heard an owl hoot, and that was when they did that long uninteresting walk to the hidden village or whatever. I know there was about 5 sound effects, but having them bunched at the end and not more varied throughout makes it boring.
Overall: 2/10 Sorry but that's my honest opinion. Just wasn't very enjoyable for me.
To start, the wordings...were very strange. I know it is old english but i'm not so sure even you understood the use of them very well.
The battles were lacking in any eye candy. Both of them had no real action, just units attacking units.
The ending was helarious only because I saw the movie that came up with it, Monty Python and the Holy Grail.
The pathways the characters ran through were a bit long and made me loose interest quite easily. You should have done something such as camera panning and better doodad placements to make it seem less uniform.
I suggest you improve on these should you work on another cinematic. When people watch these they don't want to see Warcraft, they want to see the world you put them in, and that includes more controlled battles. Instead of stab stab death death, have an actual fight. Running, hitting, casting (if thats their thing). Not just running up and attacking. No one does that.
Also, soundtrack. It could have used alot more sounds to make it more interesting and provide a better feel for the timeline and environment. Through the entire thing I only heard an owl hoot, and that was when they did that long uninteresting walk to the hidden village or whatever. I know there was about 5 sound effects, but having them bunched at the end and not more varied throughout makes it boring.
Overall: 2/10 Sorry but that's my honest opinion. Just wasn't very enjoyable for me.