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Hey other forum goers, this is the first of what i hope to be some video game reviews. Let me know how i did and how i can improve. and dont be afraid to like and subscribe. Digimon World 2 is up next
 
You sound very monotone to me, made me not want to watch it (sorry for being harsh/blunt). Try being more enthusiastic about it and do not include random bits ("epic moments") as it may spoil the game for some and you're supposed to be reviewing the game, not showing it off.

Again, I'm trying to sound constructive, sorry if it comes off as being sort of a butt :)
-Mahu
 
lol my voice has one tone if youd care to watch my other work. and im pretty sure everyone on the planet has seen DBZ.... For my next review i was thinking about just using the computers talk to narrate it, it probably has more emotion than me

Thxs for the feedback though :D
 
will try...next ones more of an angry rambling for the first part so it should at least be entertaining
 
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