Help with abilities creation.

[Tarhar]

Can someone help me creating the abilities for this hero, i've managed to do the second one so far, any help would be appreciated ...
http://forums.dota-allstars.com/index.php?showtopic=261287

 

[Pharaoh_]

a) Heal or damage nukes are overused in DotA; don't expect nice critics on that. Check Shadow Word, check Abaddon's Death coil and find out why it should be used. Anyway, for this spell, this is the trigger:

Base it off Death Coil to provide the heal or damage effect. Now the trigger:

• Trigger Decide
  • Events
    • A unit starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • Ability being cast Equal to Decide
  • Actions
    • Set Target1 = (Target unit of ability being cast)
    • Set Point1 = (Position of (Target1))
    • If/ Then/ Else
      • If (Conditions)
        • ((Target1) belongs to an enemy of (Owner of (Casting unit))) Equal to True
      • Then (Actions)
        • Unit - Create 1 dummycaster at Point1 for (Owner of (Casting unit)) facing default building degrees
        • Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Human Mountain King - Storm Bolt (Target1)
        • Unit - Add a 2.00 second expiration timer to (Last created unit)
      • Else (Actions)
        • (Do Nothing)
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_Point1)

The second one can be based off Inferno or Summon Fulborg Item or any summon skill that has the option Data - Number of Summons.

The third one: Unoriginal as hell, sorry to say. This spell can be based off Unholy Aura.

Ultimate is again based on a default spell, Rain of Fire, which provides the damage. The rest effects are trigger-involved and it goes this way:

• Trigger Apocalypse
  • Events
    • A unit starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • Ability being cast Equal to Apocalypse
  • Actions
    • Set Caster1 = (Casting unit)
    • Set Point2 = (Position of (Caster1))
    • Unit - Create 1 DummyCaster2 at Point1 for (Owner of (Caster1)) facing default building degrees
    • Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Neutral - Bloodlust (Caster1)
    • Unit - Add a 2.00 second generic expiration timer to (Last created unit)
    • Hero - Set Strength of (Caster1) to ((20) * (Strength of (Caster1) / (100))
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_Point2)

Notes: A bit unoriginal hero. His total role reminds me of Treant Protector and Pit Lord at the same time with a bit of Warlock. As a result, there are other heroes better than this one, who is a mixture of in-game skills. Combining effects is not the originality part, finding new effects on your own is.

 

[Tarhar]

Thanks for the review, which i find it a little harsh
Anyway, thx for the help...

 

[Pharaoh_]

I am sorry, but i have enough of experience on heroes suggestion, i have suggested many of my own and still, having original effects means nothing. You should consider my 'harsh' opinion, because i was selected to join the Forum Crew (which does the final judging for the heroes).

 

[Tarhar]

Oh, that means that my hero will never make it then !

 

[Nexor]

death coil won't work, because it will damage living and heal undead units, and ucan't change that, you'll have to trigger it as well

 

[Tarhar]

What triger can i use then ?