Other Survive the Lava Lord!~BETA New Map

[brodygs9630]

Intro:I was one day bored of playing DotA,so I decided to make a map.

Story​

Eleven brave explorers where exploring the island Shol'dok when they stumbled upon a volcano.They traveled down the volcano,and awoke the Lord of Lava.He will make the explorers pay for what they have done!

What it's about​

You are either an Explorer,or the Lava Lord.The point of the game for the Explorers is to survive for 1 minute.The point of the game for the Lava Lord is to kill all of the explorers before time runs out.

Pros/Cons​

Pros

~Easy for Explorers and Lava Lord

~A good game for people with little time

~Almost no skill at games required

Cons

-Very short

-Can get boring

-Not for hardcore gamers

-Not really any teamwork

Facts​

There are no teams.

Lava Lord has two skills;His Fire spell,and his Reveal spell.

Explorers have one skill,which is a stun used for stunning the other explorers,hopefully killing them.

Very short game.

Very small map size(Tiny).

What's to come​

More updates in the future are uncertain.Some of them may be:

More skills for explorers and the lava lord.

Lava lords nukes' size MAY be increased.

May Lower or Raise the Movement speed for the Explorers.

Make it so that the game consists' of rounds,and a Leader/Multiboard.

Changelogs​

[05/04/09]Beta Offically Started.

[05/03/09]Started Map.

Screenshots​

COMING SOON!

Please tell me what i can do to improve this map.Please do not suggest on making the game lnoger,or increasing map size!Contact me on Battle.net(Frozen Thron)

My Name on Frozen Throne is Slipknot_Rocks.

NOTICE:I can't upload this map to this thread(file to big) and I can't uplaod to thehelper webiste(Don't know how to),but I CAN uplaod on epic war,so heres the link!

http://www.epicwar.com/maps/94694/​

 

[WolfieeifloW]

"Can get boring" is a pretty big con to me.

Also, upload the map here.

EDIT: It's a little hard to read with titles centered and text aligned to the left.
Could you center all of it or align it all left to make it easier to read?


EDITEDIT: Some grammar/spelling:

DotA,so

Need a space.

Eleven brave explorers where exploring the island Shol'dok when they stumbled upon a volcano.They traveled down the volcano,and awoke the Lord of Lava.He will make the explorers pay for what they have done!

Where -> were.
Needs a space after "volcano.".
traveled -> travelled.
Needs a space after "volcano,".
Needs a space after "Lava.".

You are either an Explorer,or the Lava Lord.The point of the game for the Explorers is to survive for 1 minute.The point of the game for the Lava Lord is to kill all of the explorers before time runs out.

No comma needed after "Explorer".
Needs a space after "Lord.".
"The point of the game is for the Explorers is[/b] to...".
Needs a space after "minute.".
"The point of the game is for the Lava Lord is[/b] to...".

Lava Lord has two skills;His Fire spell,and his Reveal spell.

Needs a space after "skills;".
No comma needed after "spell".
Needs a space after "spell,".

Explorers have one skill,which is a stun used for stunning the other explorers,hopefully killing them.

Needs a space after "skill,".
No comma needed after "explorers".

More updates in the future are uncertain.Some of them may be:

Needs a space after "uncertain.".

May Lower or Raise the Movement speed for the Explorers.

Out of place capitals.

Make it so that the game consists' of rounds,and a Leader/Multiboard.

No apostrophe needed on "consists".
No comma needed after "rounds".

Please tell me what i can do to improve this map.Please do not suggest on making the game lnoger,or increasing map size!Contact me on Battle.net(Frozen Thron)

Capital on "i" needed.
Needs a space after "map.".
lnoger -> longer.
No comma needed after "longer".
Space needed after "size!".
Thron -> Throne.

My Name on Frozen Throne is Slipknot_Rocks.

Name -> name.

 

[brodygs9630]

Ok,I made all the text go down the center,and I uploaded the Map here.

And I know "Can get boring is a big Con",so thats why I'm asking the community for help on what to add to my map to make it funner

EDIT: ok, I'll be sure to make those changes (sometime) lol.

 

[thewrongvine]

Um, the game is 1 minute long? So basically,
-1 minute for turning on WCIII and getting on B.Net
-5 minutes maybe to get a good player amount
-3 minute loading
-1 minute playing

So 10 minutes to play for 1 minute, Maybe add some after minigames. Also, it seems like there's not too many things to play around with, two spells only for the firelord? Perhaps getting some cool, unique and fun spells would be better. :thup:

~Hai-Bye-Vine~

 

[brodygs9630]

hmmm...I think I'm gonna try that im the future. I'll be working on the map on Friday alot, so I'll try to add some more things

 

[Fire-Wolf]

I think you should make these game modes to increase the fun:
-1 Minute
-3 Minutes
-5 Minutes
-10 Minutes

-None Repeating
-Repeat

Basiclly Repeat means once the explorers or the lava lord wins, it starts over again with a different lava lord. Get the idea? Also add more abilities! 3 abilities doesn't give the players much strategy, just run and stun. Also maybe make more classes? Like instead of just lava lord, add different guys, and make explorers have different classes also. Each with different stats and abilities. These are just some tips to help make it funner.

 

[brodygs9630]

hmmm....I think the different game modes is a good idea!But the only thing is Im not sure about how to remake the codes to fit the other game modes...