SD_Ryoko said:Your not alone alex. I just drew on desks instead of paper.
SD_Ryoko said:I remember one chick wrote "Your satan drawings make me so wet"
To be a tad bit more descriptive on conan's point...you don't round the ends of the chest off of the body of the dude...it just doesn't look right. Not like an arse (conan is so crazy...that has to be about the first thing he says about everything), but like something weird and unhumanoid-like.
So, rather, you draw the ends of it straight down with the rest of the body or around the shoulder (as that is how it looks in real life, not around the back but around the clavicles). Other than that, great job. The wings look fantastic.
Alexander said:So you're suggesting that Conan is obsessed with talking about ass?
Ryoko -.- WHAT DID I TELL YOU ABOUT PUTTING YOUR D.N.A. IN OTHER PEOPLE'S FOOD?!
It's like the beginning of a horror movie... A world of Ryoko's. Ladies locked in the closet and whatnot...
Uh, that's... Easier to talk about and type up then visualize... Care to supply an example of that?
Alexander said:Depends, we've asked that about your face, care to enlighten us on that one?
Pardon me for not being the best at human anatomy and asking for CONSTRUCTIVE critism -.-
ROFL OMG, that litterally had me rolling on the ground laugfhing, ROFL.
I like the concept, but it just doesn't look right. I can't put my finger on it, but it doesn't really look like the angel is coming out of the dude. It looks like he's eating him.
The nipples on the bottom dude need to be a bit more erect or more defined, since he is excited seeing as he's spewing an angel out of his mouth.
The angel's head tilts to far to the right, and is properly aligned.
To be honest, the angel looks like he's doing the oogie boogie dance. THose hands should really be opened and pointed upwards.
The man on the bottom also needs to be tilted slightly back more to show the pressure of forcing an angel out of his body, and the perciever should be able to see the strain.
So, to conclude, I like the concept, but the skewed lines and oogie boogie dancin' angel just don't make it look like it should. It's still very good though.
But...the top angel's head is a tad too small. Other than that, perfect.