This is a FanFic I wrote for a contest on UrbanRivals.com.
Double or Nothing
“Look, I’m not saying we have to whack him, but we sure as hell can’t let him get up into that ring tomorrow,” Donnie said, grinding his cigar to an ashy pulp. He swirled the ashes around in the tray...
Thanks, I made the correction story=store.
As far as the mutant reindeer etc., that stuff was meant as a joke. As anyone who has ever been to a grocery store before knows, those National Enquirer magazines make up all sorts of retarded shit.
Aaha WrongVine I clicked this thread with the intention of saying the same thing.
As for these tips...
I'm not sure what qualifies Lambda to come and dictate how we should write.
Regardless, some of these tips are just plain bad.
These two tips contradict. Obscene words are part of...