finally finished my spell set need opinions

[mems]

Crypt Lord Spell Pack

lol it has taken alot time with the holiday that im in but finally i have finished 1 of 4 heros for my map and i liked to share them you can take a look at the spell set for Crypt lord from:
http://www.wc3sear.ch/?p=Spells&ID=1187

And please dont use the spells couse they still have some memory leaks and i cant edit them for some resons. Wait untill i update the spells or mail me from [email protected] if you need one of them immedeately i will try to spend sometime for this.

Thanks for everyone who has helped me and now i need some opinions about them may be you can find some bugs

4 spells,
Bloody Pile:
The Crypt Lord jumps upon a target enemy ground unit and uses his massive claw to throw his victim away with great force dealing XXX damage, destroying all trees and dealing 50 damage to all units in the path of the target unit. Target unit loses self-control for 4 seconds.

Mass Impale:
The Crypt Lord burrows into the ground to surprise his enemies with his massive claws. Swinging his claws around, he deals XX damage to and hurls enemy ground units into the air, stunning each unit for 4 seconds.

Disease Flap:
The Crypt Lord flaps his wings to release a virulent disease that has developed under his wings after ages of lying dormant in his crypt. Damages all units in the contaminated area for XX damage per second. Lasts 7 seconds.

Air Strike:
The Crypt Lord furiously flaps his little wings to make his massive body hover in the air. When he becomes too exhausted to continue hovering, he falls down and slams the ground with his massive body dealing xx damage to nearby enemy units.

 

[Ninva]

What does it do? It doesn't say...

 

[mems]

hum..

U must download the zip file and open it.
open the map in this zip file with your World editor
and then press test map...

 

[Im_On_56k]

I think he means by, what do the abilities do?

 

[mems]

hum doesn't they have tooltips?
i was meaning if he tests the map he can read tooltips. you cannot understand them from pictures or just looking a presentation destription...
let me edit my post then...

 

[Mattador]

Awesome

Hey man,

I checked out your spells. They are really cool, very complex. I really like the one that makes him jump into the air. I hope to use that spell if not the others in a map I am making. (I'll give full credit no problem) But I might need you to help me modify them just slightly if thats possible.

Good stuff. Thanks for sharing.

 

[mems]

Hey man,

I checked out your spells. They are really cool, very complex. I really like the one that makes him jump into the air. I hope to use that spell if not the others in a map I am making. (I'll give full credit no problem) But I might need you to help me modify them just slightly if thats possible.

Good stuff. Thanks for sharing.

thanks very much having some feedback makes you to create more advanced maps/spells

mail me your needs, i'll modify and post back the spell file to you
[email protected]

 

[mems]

Bump

 

[dArKzEr0]

Wicked job mems, the spells are great as I knew they would be. Your English is a bit weak though for the tooltips, here’s some clearer English for you to use, if you want:

Bloody Pile:
Learn tooltip:
The Crypt Lord jumps upon a target enemy ground unit and uses his massive claw to throw his victim away with great force, destroying all trees and dealing 50 damage to all units in the path of the target unit. Target unit loses self-control for 4 seconds. |n|n|cffffcc00Level 1|r - 200 damage. |n|cffffcc00Level 2|r - 400 damage. |n|cffffcc00Level 3|r - 600 damage.
Level tooltip:
The Crypt Lord jumps upon a target enemy ground unit and uses his massive claw to throw his victim away with great force dealing XXX damage, destroying all trees and dealing 50 damage to all units in the path of the target unit. Target unit loses self-control for 4 seconds.

Mass Impale:
Learn tooltip:
The Crypt Lord burrows into the ground to surprise his enemies with his massive claws. Swinging his claws around, he deals damage to and hurls enemy ground units into the air, stunning each unit for 4 seconds.|n|n|cffffcc00Level 1|r - 40 damage per target. |n|cffffcc00Level 2|r - 70 damage per target |n|cffffcc00Level 3|r - 110 damage per target.
Level tooltip:
The Crypt Lord burrows into the ground to surprise his enemies with his massive claws. Swinging his claws around, he deals XX damage to and hurls enemy ground units into the air, stunning each unit for 4 seconds.

Disease Flap:
Learn tooltip
The Crypt Lord flaps his wings to release a virulent disease that has developed under his wings after ages of lying dormant in his crypt. Damages all units in the contaminated area for 7 seconds. |n|n|cffffcc00Level 1|r - 40 damage per second. |n|cffffcc00Level 2|r - 60 damage per second. |n|cffffcc00Level 3|r - 80 damage per second.

The Crypt Lord flaps his wings to release a virulent disease that has developed under his wings after ages of lying dormant in his crypt. Damages all units in the contaminated area for XX damage per second. |nLasts 7 seconds.

Air Strike:
The Crypt Lord furiously flaps his little wings to make his massive body hover in the air. When he becomes too exhausted to continue hovering, he falls down and slams the ground with his massive body dealing 1000 damage to nearby enemy units.

dArKz

 

[mems]

OMG thanks for that

I am really bad on tooltips and i really needed that I have been commented about my English on tooltips all the time.

I hope poeple can understand my answers here lol

 

[Laika.]

Your english is understandable, just not completely 'correct'. Out of curiousity, what is your native language?

 

[mems]

Turkish
PS: u have not commented my spells yet?

 

[Laika.]

I will, I will =p I've been busy working on an essay =x

 

[dArKzEr0]

I already did:
"Wicked job mems"
The spells are great man, well done.

"OMG thanks for that"
Anytime

Maybe you should submit one of your spells for the ability contest. I think Bloody Pile is a great pick and has a good chance of winning.
dArKz

 

[mems]

i have submited another one now i will work on to correct the memory leaks on this spells

Thansk for commenting everyone

 

[mems]

Spells are updated
all memory leak problems solved yo can now use them in your maps safely