Try my FIRST Rpg!

[C-Death]

It's a AVP save/load RPG, id like to thank the guy who gave me the source,
(look for posts by me)
To try it out, click on ur pred and type -level 500.

well hope u like it!


Download it here

 

[Naine]

Could you please tell us about it? Well, I will personally download it and play it now. It's always good to support the little guys

Good Luck! I will come back with some opinions. I can't play it all tonight, as it's getting late, but I will play as much as I can

 

[lllidan]

off topic: where do u live in Florida?

 

[C-Death]

It's avp, u know the movie, You pick ur pred,(slayer or hunter) and fight you'r way to the brood mother! then when u have her dead, save, get some gold, it's just a Rpg

 

[Naine]

Okay, so I have played your RPG... Maybe things good about it:

-Great Special Effects
-Good Map Preview
-Good Medles, Icons
-Nice doodads

About 1000 things wrong with it

-No hotkeys for abilities
-Not many abilities
-Game didn't end when I killed queen
-Spawns didn't stop coming from the queen when I killed her
-Spawns just didn't stop coming!!! LoL... 1 by 1 by 1 by 1 by 1 by 1!!!
-No Help Menu
-2 teams, and it says you're to ally other team or something... What?
-When I spawned a firebat to see how strong it is it kicked my ass. I could't kill it no matter what I did so I used cheat.
-Tooltips had a . then a ! ( .! )
-At the start it said my hero died (Which was apparently a dwarf or something)
-No cinematic at start, or end.
-No end at all
-Not many items
-You should make the ice effects (if you keep them) to go all at once for a nicer effect.
-Marine for spawn is too weak, I killed him losing 5 health, though got 3/4 experiance.
-Whats the point? No story, no ending.
-When I use Camofloge it seems to last forever and the icon turned green.

And in the poll, please put one that said "Still needs work" or I will be forced to say it sucked You need to test it youself a little more. I wish you luck still.

Hope this serves as constructive critism! Good luck with your map!

 

[C-Death]

hey hey hey!
First save/load rpg, im fairly new to map making dont forget!

 

[Naine]

I know

But, I did say constructive

Think about it... Would you have noticed if I didn't point it out?

Don't take all those things I disliked as an insult. Truethfully, for for first save/load RPG it's good. I'm just pointing out how to make it better.

Please do not take it as an insult, as I surely did not mean it as one.

Good luck with your map!

 

[C-Death]

:banghead: :banghead: Thanks, there will be re-releases! so look for new one's!

:banghead:

 

[C-Death]

Okay, so I have played your RPG... Maybe things good about it:

-Great Special Effects
-Good Map Preview
-Good Medles, Icons
-Nice doodads

About 1000 things wrong with it

-No hotkeys for abilities
-Not many abilities
-Game didn't end when I killed queen
-Spawns didn't stop coming from the queen when I killed her
-Spawns just didn't stop coming!!! LoL... 1 by 1 by 1 by 1 by 1 by 1!!!
-No Help Menu
-2 teams, and it says you're to ally other team or something... What?
-When I spawned a firebat to see how strong it is it kicked my ass. I could't kill it no matter what I did so I used cheat.
-Tooltips had a . then a ! ( .! )
-At the start it said my hero died (Which was apparently a dwarf or something)
-No cinematic at start, or end.
-No end at all
-Not many items
-You should make the ice effects (if you keep them) to go all at once for a nicer effect.
-Marine for spawn is too weak, I killed him losing 5 health, though got 3/4 experiance.
-Whats the point? No story, no ending.
-When I use Camofloge it seems to last forever and the icon turned green.

And in the poll, please put one that said "Still needs work" or I will be forced to say it sucked You need to test it youself a little more. I wish you luck still.

Hope this serves as constructive critism! Good luck with your map!

When you kill queen, it's not supposed to :banghead:
there will be alot of chages like:

Hotkeys
More levels
more abilities
Hotkey's for them.
And LOTS MORE

 

[lllidan]

i thought i had posted a response last night... weird

anyway it's okay for a first RPG but you need to go a little more in-depth with the RPG (more heroes abilities, weapons, armor, units, etc.) Naine's suggestions are pretty good too.

 

[Naine]

OOOOH! That explains it

I couldn't find what to do

I will be happy to test your new versions though. Just post them here when it's done!

Also, please do not double post, just simply EDIT your post.

Thanks, and good luck!

 

[Carson]

Hey here's a little improvement for you

A unit - Brood Mother dies

Action - End game?
I dunno, I've never really done ending triggers yet.

 

[Zakyath]

Why would you want to end the game? Don't you want to keep fighting and defeat the ultimate bosses of a game and get the most ultimate items and then save your game, restart and show everyone how much you pawn? I haven't played this, but you SHOULD be able to continue after defeating last boss.

 

[Carson]

good idea...

 

[corvusHaunt]

Naine called you a little guy.

It was okay, but definately needed work like Naine posted. Keep at it and it will get better.