[Comic] First Time

[vypur85]

Skipped a week. Was sick last week.
A mild one this week. Enjoy.

Title: First Time​

Idea taken from azareus. Thank you.

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[ReVolver]

Classic, reminds me when I got on the train for the first time as a kid and the guy punched a hole on it, pissed me off since it had a nice picture art on it lol.

 

[vypur85]

Lol. The idea was really good though.
Even the script made me laugh.

Sorry TWV (if you're seeing this).
Your idea will be posted soon enough.

 

[gameman]

The second panels main character isn't as good as the rest of the comic. He feels very stiff and the lack of proper eyes does not help. His eyes are probably non existent or his eyebrows have over grown.

 

[thewrongvine]

lol it's okay vypur, I don't even remember mine, and I like this one,
Mavatar, nice.
Probably a stupid question here but, what's like the white patch outlines for?

~Hai-Bye-Vine~

 

[vypur85]

> second panels main character isn't as good

Actually there are a lot of posture defect in most of the panels.
The third and last panels are kinda weird too.
In the third panel, the body is too short. And there was perspective error.
In the last panel, the arm is drawn too deep to the back. And there's posture problem.
I was a bit lazy to improve them even though I realised some of them .
Was sick when drawing those...


> what's like the white patch outlines for

Just for the sake of effect. Maybe it doesn't look as good as I intend it to be.

 

[FireCat]

Lawl :thup:

 

[Romek]

The white lines draw attention to the main guy, which is good.

Awesome comic :thup:.

 

[thewrongvine]

Nah, the white lines are good, like what Romek said.

~Hai-Bye-Vine~

 

[Jindo]

Haha, very nice!

 

[quraji]

Hah, that's pretty funny. And looks nice as always, good job :thup:

 

[azareus]

Yay, he made it!
LOL

 

[MisterFrank]

Lovin' it!