Dark Beat

[Whitesock]

This one is a Hip Hop beat with a synth lead. I think it sounds pretty cool so lets hear what you think.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/208777

Note that this is still in progress. I need to make some clever counter melodies to progress the piece and I will probably take out that arp part.

 

[NaPzt3R]

It's okay. Turn the bass on the kick up, and turn down the synths. It seems a little offtone sometimes, but that's easily fixed. Your hi-hat is too "straight forward", put some variation in it. Maybe turn the drums into a breakbeat instead. It's a good club-banger, but it's far from done yet.

 

[Zakyath]

The lead hits too many notes that doesn't belong on that scale.

 

[Nigerianrulz]

The lead hits too many notes that doesn't belong on that scale.

not really that many but just that one or two notes on every section.

(finally able to access newgrounds again , been overseas)

 

[Zakyath]

>not really that many but just that one or two notes on every section.

But that's far too many

 

[FireCat]

I Wait for the result first... LOL

 

[Jimpy]

Pretty cool, totally different style from what I'm use to hearing.
In my opinion you should increase the bass a bit, and add some dynamics to the hi-hat sounds. As others have commented there's a few notes that clash with whats in place, and you could probably just drop them instead of replacing, and have it sound good. It loops nicely which is a bonus for the users of NG.

Keep it up.

 

[Squll2]

Wow, Interesting, I quite like it, its definatly unique - well to my ears anyway.

I absoultly LOVE the synth that comes in around 45 seconds in the background
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IMO i think you should turn down the main synth mabye 1-3%

and I agree with what Jimmy has said about

 

[Whitesock]

It be finished!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/211742

Enjoy. I hope your ears don't bleed.

 

[Nigerianrulz]

It be finished!

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/211742

Enjoy. I hope your ears don't bleed.

the intro and first part was good, some notes in the piano part is still out of tune. otherwise its pretty awesome :thup: