well, I've been working on a song for a while now. all that's missing now is a refrain (and perhaps an ending), but I really can't come up with anything. so I'll give it some time, and just try to improve what I already have. this is where you guys come in. any feedback whatsoever is appreciated. Don’t play with fire or you’ll get burnt, You tell yourself, over and over again. But for these embers you still yearn, Have you got the strength to abstain? Don’t succumb to the resplendent glow, Extinguish the flames before they spread. Down that long and torrid road, You will be scorched if you tread.