Short Story Gothic Story - Rosie

Discussion in 'The Writer's Corner' started by esb, Dec 20, 2010.

  1. esb

    esb Because none of us are as cruel as all of us.

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    A friend of mine had to do a short Gothic story for her class. So I decided to write it up for her, since I did two years ago :p

     
  2. esb

    esb Because none of us are as cruel as all of us.

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    Good? Bad? Alright?
     
  3. thewrongvine

    thewrongvine The Evolved Panda Commandant Staff Member

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    Good?
    I don't get it, heh. Who was the note from?
    Interesting, though.

    ~Hai-Bye-Vine~
     
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  4. esb

    esb Because none of us are as cruel as all of us.

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    Since it was in 1st person, it was written by her. Well that's what I aimed at. I wrote it in a few minutes >_<
     
  5. Zakyath

    Zakyath Member

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    I didn't really understand what was gothic in it, you could at least have thrown in some spaghetti western clothes on her or something:p I don't read many stories here, mostly because I'm not that into reading short stories, but I managed to get through this one - it had a nice flow, and that's all about what I can say about it (liked the rhyming thing towards the end, too) - but as I said, short stories aren't my thing. I don't think that short stories present the characters, theme, story, etc. in a fair way because it is so limited.
     
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  6. esb

    esb Because none of us are as cruel as all of us.

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    Ah thanks. Well for her assignment, gothic had to be sort of scary (Not in the sense of a headless guy chasing and killing people), depressing and sort of dark. With a touch of paranormal.

    Thank you for taking the effor to read. I on the other hand love and prefer short stories, however probably a chunk longer than this one xD
     

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