Seth Cross Writing

[DM Cross]

Just so you guys know, there's some info here:
http://z14.invisionfree.com/Goths_High/index.php?showtopic=65

And here's the GH.com "Official Corruption thread"
http://z14.invisionfree.com/Goths_High/index.php?showtopic=1086

And last but not least, the thread for the next book in this series, Re-Birth:
http://z14.invisionfree.com/Goths_High/index.php?showtopic=1087

 

[DM Cross]

OK, this is the way we're gonna work this out.

EVERYONE who wants a sneak-peek of Corruption, send an e-mail to the following:

[email protected]

The subject MUST be: Corruption Teaser
The body MUST be: "Corruption - The next step in evolution"

THAT'S IT!
Every e-mail in my inbox will get chapters 1-5. That's it. No one is getting ANYTHING more than 5.

Why? Legal issues. Besides, when I get the book published, ya'll can buy it Then you'll have the entire thing! WOO!

So... Want the teaser? Send the e-mail.

 

[Krys A Night]

So.... When are you going to finish the first chapter of the next book?

 

[Halahan]

I'd just like to say congrats!
Is this your first book published?

 

[DM Cross]

So.... When are you going to finish the first chapter of the next book?

NEVER! No... Eventually. Iunno, when I get time.

I'd just like to say congrats!
Is this your first book published?

Not published yet. WIll be, eventually.

 

[DM Cross]

Combined Story Ideas by Seth

http://www.gothshigh.net/forums/showthread.php?t=567

 

[Krys A Night]

I like this idea, it's really good. It's so twisted that I could see that it could come out of you.

 

[Halahan]

Good... Freaky... It seems a bit to freaky though, maybe play that down a little. Just my opinion, I dont like those kidns of twisted movies or books.

 

[sqrage]

Seems like a good plot, also seems hard to write.

 

[XXXconanXXX]

Love the plot. Sick, twisted, and it seems like a great thriller. The name really fits too.

 

[DM Cross]

Too bad it's my autobiography.

WHAT?!

Nothing, nothing.

But seriously, I have a few separate ideas on how to write this, perspectively... There are some very interesting angles to do this one.

 

[IKilledKEnny]

Where can I Pre-Order this? Seriously though, seems like a great idea. However if you are going to right this I have few suggestions (I know usually it is very hard to suggest things about writing a book becuase it is a very personal action, however those are just few pointers).

• Seeing the victims' thoughts would be very intresting, seeing only the lunitic's point of view would make it very hard to make intresting charecters as he can't understand people.
  
  
• I don't know how would this fit but seeing a detective could be nice too, if you ever say columbo, you know who did the crime and you watch the detective trying to figure it out. However in your book he would fail (I assume?).
  
  
• Maybe a short description of his life after he released the book. Is it an immediate success? Does the detective understands what he did and gets him in jail? Does the book fail misrebaly making him extremely poor? Does he make another book like this one?

hope it ws somewhat useful!

~IKilledKEnny~

 

[DM Cross]

Random Story Blurp

http://www.gothshigh.net/forums/showthread.php?t=569

 

[IKilledKEnny]

Nice, I love the way you write, and it kept me intrested the whole stroy. DO continue this!!

 

[DM Cross]

Yeah, ask Krys... Most people tend to like my writing. Though, I know it really sucks and you're all just delusional ^.^

If I were to run with this, it would be a series of detective books with a splash of magical/mythical crap in it. And it would be after the two series that I have lined up.

 

[DM Cross]

Re-Birth

Book 7 in a series of 10. My second book project (Yes, I started on 6... Don't ask)

Not gonna make a blurp for it Read the Corruption thread to figure out what happens there.

Chapter one's done. Will start with more soon, hopefully.

 

[Krys A Night]

^.^ I loved it.

 

[DM Cross]

You always do.

However, re-reading it and going over some things in my mind, I was not pleased with the overall piece... It seemed rushed, really. Especially when considering how fast I came out with the Alexander part. I plan on re-writing this.

 

[Halahan]

Yes it did feel rather rushed, but still it was one hell of a piece. Maybe ease into the Mind thing a bit more, describe the four characters that are all rolled in more so its easier to understand.
From my understanding, Thomas is a guardian that grew up and had a brother that died but his wife sacraficed herself and he was reborn as a really ownage vamp but Tyrale was the father of all vampires, and he wanted to kill them for some forsaken reason but Zaris (A witch?) surprised him and erased his memory of Alexander and Thomas. But then he discovered them or his memories again or whatever and got inside Alexander's mind and talked to him.
But the story itself was pretty nice. A bit short of incredible.
And you said in there that Alexander was the 2nd Vamp ever in all of time. So is Tyrale the first?, but then with Thomas you have him killing a vampire, and there are already others like Jessica and Elizibeth. So thats confusing.

But I really loved it, beautifully written. The idea is well rounded and formed. gj
(Correct anything in my summary thats wrong)

 

[Pineapple]

he is the second ever vampire, but there is more then 2... He was made a vampire before the others excluding Tyrale.