Seth Cross Writing

[UnknowVector]

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btw

Taking off at a job, Alexander made up his mind.

its on page 11, and i think you mean jog.

 

[DM Cross]

Sorry, lol, but I had to edit that It was appreciated, though

Yeah, though I meant jog...

 

[UnknowVector]

Um I don't even see what you changed... rofl w/e.

Something to do with turning on my tv and seeing a bunch of pokemon talking about going up a level... fried my mind...

 

[DM Cross]

Well, for me, the !s didn't wrap, they just stretched the site. I made it skip a few lines so that it'd wrap and keep to the site's original dimensions

 

[MasterOfABCs]

My thoughts:

I last left on a chapter 9.

It was very interesting but had it's problems.

I made it to page 2 on chapter 10.

Alex, i've got one thing to say...

you've got something here, and it has a good potential but,

Less is more.

 

[DM Cross]

That really doesn't tell me much -.- Obscure critism is barely any better than no critism...

Please embelish.

 

[DM Cross]

For any Corruption fans:

My goal is to have the entire book written by June. Then I look for a publisher. Then I start on Re-Birth

Enjoy that news.

 

[emjlr3]

where is it I cant find it

 

[DM Cross]

I'm against releasing the chapters out in open public, mainly because I don't have copyright anything on it, aside from the files which I e-mailed myself...

I'm more likely to e-mail the story to someone... Or I might upload it at GH.com, but slowly and maybe only parts of chapters at a time.

 

[emjlr3]

so u got a thread about ur book that u rnt sharing?? im lost
i wanted to read it, or what u have done so far

 

[DM Cross]

This is an old old OLD thread, Em It started in the now-defunct SM forum and before, I had chapters 1-13 up for upload.

Considering that this forum is public to all, and I have no copyright, I don't think I ought to upload it for anyone to dl who comes by, do you?

Got an e-mail? I'll mail you the first few chapters (PM me if you don't wanna publicate your e-mail address)

 

[Stinman]

I haven't read any of those chapters yet but they sound really good and i will check into them. But seriously that sounds like a really good story line.

 

[DM Cross]

The chapters are by e-mail only You can't download them from here. Maybe GothsHigh.com, but not here or anywhere else on the net

 

[DM Cross]

Combined Poetry Threads by Seth

I used to write a lot of poetry back in the day. Sadly, I don't do that as much nowadays, but I manage. Here's some of the stuff I've written in the past:

Hurt Me
Nightmare
My Brothers - Dedicated to two young men I once considered brothers.
Imagine, Picture and Pretend
A New Kind of Angel
Unmasked
Story Time
Coward
The Three Acts of Life - Fear, Depression and Rage
Unsatisfied

I once "won" a couple of poetic awards from poetry.com, but I don't recommend sending them any work. They're kind of a cheap with their prizes.

Enjoy.

 

[Stinman]

Wow, that "brothers"poem is really sad, but that is really good poetry. I really liked it.

 

[DM Cross]

When I went to Washington D.C. for the ISP (International Society of Poets, the cult of poetry.com) convention, I read a revised version of My Brothers for the judges. I didn't win anything, but a few people came up to me and said they had been impressed and a few even admitted to getting teary eyed at it

Most of my poetry will be depressing and/or sad, mainly due to the reason why I write poetry. I write poetry when I'm upset, mad, etc. etc. Basically, any negative feeling. I write poetry to get that out and onto paper.

I write my stories basically when I'm hyper because of too many ideas in my head.

I'm an odd individual... Anyway, thanks for the comment Glad you enjoyed 'em. If I post more of them on GH.com, I'll remember to come back here and link ya'll.

 

[C-Death]

Iv always wondered how to add like a love scene to a book and not make it to cheesy.

 

[Krys A Night]

stay away from all the cliches that you can. The romance book cliches of falling into the others eyes, and and swept off their feet with a kiss. Though, if it's a good one, the room will go all spiny (know from personal experience). Two hearts won't suddenly be beating in unison. That's all I can think of, I don't write love stories.

 

[Ozzdog]

Best series ever: The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy

5 Books

#1 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
#2 The Restaurant at the End of the Univers
#3 Life the Univers, and Everything
#4 Goodbye, and Thanks for all the Fish
#5 Mostly Harmless

Funnies series ever. You need to be quick witted to understand this sense of humor though.

 

[Halahan]

That is a really great poem. It is pretty sad. Did you want a little constructive critisism on it?