Cinematic Wrath of the Undead

[Kazuga]

Cool! a lot better. fix the terrain... and it'll be good.
Nice story but not very expressive. What's like "its not him I'm after" has no sense of emotion. Add some comas.
Like this : "it's not him, I'm after YOU!" will be more expressive
And add sounds please...

The king just stands there? how boring... add throne.
The units don't have any animation. Like when the dreadlord hears about the sargeras, play his attack animation, saying "DARN!" will make it more lively.
Rate this... 6/10 for now. Good job tough. I love the storyline.

Good tips! I'm going to add them soon enough:thup:.

I managed to make walability over the moat by using a tree bridge and removing the model file of it. It was the only brigde that worked at that location for some reason...

The problem now is that the units walk down under the water and then comes up at the other side...

 

[R@i_no_Wyrm]

as the others said, just use a flying unit.
(add crow form when she enters the region, then change the rate. remove it when she's out)

 

[Kazuga]

as the others said, just use a flying unit.
(add crow form when she enters the region, then change the rate. remove it when she's out)

Tried that but it doesn't work properly since the height also changes..

 

[R@i_no_Wyrm]

change the flying rate back to 0 when she leaves.
Just remember something. Those footmans guarding the king... make them patrol?

Opening the gate using elvish magic does not make any sense to me. maybe break it? or control the gatekeeper to open it (since gate WILL be guarded heavily in a search of a scout)

 

[Kazuga]

Made some progress and followed some of your tips but the stupid drawbridge keeps bug up, it's leaning over so when it is opened it will stay under the ground wich makes you unable to even see it... This hapends no matter where I put it or if it has fly or float (can't put it there if it has foot since the "unit" is 300 range infront of the actual visible drawbridge...)

Should I submit it anyway? And any tips on how to fix it...?

 

[Dakho]

You should just let the ground be there its not that big of a deal to make some big thing about.

 

[takethat]

when the drawbridge open, it go underwater? then make the draw bridge a flying unit in object editor, when you open it, set its moving height higher then the water level.

 

[Kazuga]

Well Takethat had alot of complains that needed to be fixed... Any way after one hour and 30 minutes of work I FINALLY managed to make that stupid drawbridge stand at the correct location without leaning... (Dunno if it was worth it..)
I tried to make it flying before but it leaned over.. Fixed now though.
Changes:
Made progress in the cinematic.
Edited some on the terrain here and there (not much so don't expect to much).
Edited music and sounds.
Changed the way the spy master opens the drawbridge (if you want to know how you will have to watch the cinematic^^. Ain't I evil?^^)

Please report bugs and issues.

 

[thewrongvine]

So where's the DL?

 

[Kazuga]

At first post.

Edit: Sorry should have mentioned that..

 

[thewrongvine]

But that's the same one as last time.

EDIT: Lol, you didn't change the name. Please change the file name with like an increment version every time like [Cine] Undead Assault v1 then v2, so on.

 

[Kazuga]

Reuploded it with the name "Undead assult", will follow your tip to name it after edits. Still looking for a better name for it since "Undead assult" doesn't really sound good, not to me anyway.

 

[thewrongvine]

Well, first of all, it's assualt.

How are these names:
Undead Onslaught
Wrath of the Undead
Death's Hour

and I'll come with more later.

Anyway, I finished watching it. First thing: please fix your grammar, lol. Did you even test watch it yourself? I always watch my cinematics like 3 times before I release it. Some of the cameras were blocked and some of the lines (that people said) didn't make sense. Also, the wall model is so big that it doesn't show sometimes, until later on. And in the beginning of the cinematic when it shows the castle gate, 2 footmen are floating in the air, lol.

Good job anyway! Can't wait for update. It's always fun to see someone else's cinematic.

 

[Kazuga]

Well, first of all, it's assualt.

Wops^^

How are these names:
Undead Onslaught
Wrath of the Undead
Death's Hour

Hm I like Wrath of the Undead and Deaths's Hour, will pick one of them if a better one doesn't come up. Thanks:thup:

Anyway, I finished watching it. First thing: please fix your grammar, lol

Hm I misspelld somewhere? Please say at what locations (atleast what scenes) so I can edit them.

Did you even test watch it yourself? I always watch my cinematics like 3 times before I release it.

Yes I watched it twice before I uploaded it and alot of times when I was fixing with the music.

Some of the cameras were blocked and some of the lines (that people said) didn't make sense.

What lines and what cameras? (Only so I can fix them )

Also, the wall model is so big that it doesn't show sometimes

So that's the reason? That's the normal size of it I will see if I can shrink them.

And in the beginning of the cinematic when it shows the castle gate, 2 footmen are floating in the air, lol.

LOL wops^^ I must apologize for that one, I was trying to make 2 footman standing on it guarding but I must have put the flying hight to high.

Good job anyway! Can't wait for update. It's always fun to see someone else's cinematic.

Thanks and agree

 

[WarLuvr3393]

Way too many typos bud.

 

[Kazuga]

Way too many typos bud.

Typos?

 

[Dakho]

Name possibilities...

Terror of the Night
Shadow of the Scourge
Fury of the Scourge
The Fall of <Town Name>

Also. For making units on the ramparts, you can make doodad models of them (unless they fight later) and just use ctrl+page up. That raises them. Page down does the opposite.

 

[Kazuga]

Fixed some on the terrain, no story line progress made in this update (sorry..) Also edited some doodads etc. Shrinked the walls so hopefully you won't see through them every now and then. Added rain at the dead forest (please comment if it makes it better or worse). You can find the latest update at the first post.

 

[dragonhord]

Grammar and spelling... Killin' me man XD. So many errors in spelling and grammar throughout you may want to fix those...

 

[Kazuga]

Hm... Your not the first who mention it but I can't edit it if you don't say where it's misspelld. I'm sorry but grammar is not my best matter.. The map is unprotected so you can if you want change it if it is a real lot..