I Made a Song: A Little Bit More (Than Nothing)

Jessi

I'm so green. Like a Machine.
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A Little Bit More Than Nothing
(experimental title)

please don't give this out to people. :)

written and played and sung by me.

A_Little_Bit_More_complete.mp3.html (now an mp3 file, sorry. :p)

(3080 kb)

c&c is welcome, and Id love to hear what you think!

I figured I should post this publicly and get some feedback. :cool:
 
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esb

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Not bad, you have a nice voice.

Although it was hard to hear (especially your voice) even at full volume (maybe it was my bro's rock music in the background), so I can't really say anything about the lyrics. I'll listen to it again later when it's more quiet around me.
 

Jessi

I'm so green. Like a Machine.
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ya, it's pretty quiet, I should probably boost the sound on the file a bit.
 

undeadorcjerk

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Idk, i just think your deaf esb. I could hear it just find. Sounds nice. I wonder if in the future we'd be able to buy "The Best of Jessi"
 

The Helper

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That was really nice Jessi. You are very talented. Bravo!
 

Jessi

I'm so green. Like a Machine.
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Idk, i just think your deaf esb. I could hear it just find. Sounds nice. I wonder if in the future we'd be able to buy "The Best of Jessi"

haha, I dont know if I'll ever do anything more than this one. And I definitely won't be going mainstream, either.

That was really nice Jessi. You are very talented. Bravo!

Thanks. :)

why is it 32mb?
1 song 32mb?

well ill dl if i have time..me gone school :p

Original was in .wav, so it was big. Converted to .mp3, fixed that.
 

Akatsuki

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You have a good voice.

I remembered my sister used to record her own singing. I don't hear her singing anymore. Because she went to college. With a singing scholarship.
 
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"please don't give this out to people. :) "
You do know that it is an open forum and anyone can find this, right? :p

I'd say it's nice, althrough it somewhat diffirent of music I usually listen to.

At your age, it's great, if you're really 14.
Don't quit music and you might reach something.

But hey, what do I know, I live in a country where this guy (I can't make myself spell his name) is now more popular Andrius Mamontovas, where right before New Year they sing a song about f'king, well, you see that cultural degradation in music is reaching it's maximum.

And shouldn't this be in the music forum?
 

Jessi

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I know it's a public forum, but I don't want anyone going to post this on other websites or anything.
 

DDRtists

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Jessi is 16 I believe, her profile says 1991.
Listening now. :)

Very nice, you have a lot of talent. Keep it up. :)
 

Hero

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You have a wonderful voice..

That song is in my Ipod Now :p

You are very talented...

I am pretty sure if you would sing live you would get a gig.

Too bad you live so far away.

One of my friends owns a recording studio and I could of hooked you up with access if you were really into it. But you live so far away (Or so I think)

Anyways keep up the work and I look forward to more songs ;)

As for the volume I had no problem with it...it played perfectly

+rep is all I can give...
 
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It was alright. I was expecting worse, but in the end it wasn't that bad. My largest gripe is that the subject of the song is so overused and hackneyed. I could swear 75% of popular songs are about pair bonding or relationships among humans in some way.

The addition of piano or a bassline or something would improve the song a lot, if you are able to do this.

5.5/10 overall.
 

Nigerianrulz

suga suga how'd you get so fly?
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The addition of piano or a bassline or something would improve the song a lot, if you are able to do this.

that was made the song on billboard hot 100s xDD
(i would love to play the piano :D)

anywaz the song was beautful and the song is sex <333
 

darkRae

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Very kool :D
The sound was too small though, I needed to turn my speaker to the maximum before I could hear it.
 
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>5.5/10 overall.
Pretty harsh.

You sure are talented.. Really nice voice and all. Only bad thing is that it's so quiet :p..
 

worldofDeath

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Great song almost made me cry for some reason. Great job. + rep.

My girlfirend liked it also. Sound is good to dont change it.
 

Jessi

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anywaz the song was beautful and the song is sex <333

I suppose that's a good thing?

>5.5/10 overall.
Pretty harsh.

You sure are talented.. Really nice voice and all. Only bad thing is that it's so quiet :p..

Actually, if this were rated on a professional scale, i would expect no more than that. It certainly isnt something I would count on as a one-song-hit or anything.

Great song almost made me cry for some reason. Great job. + rep.

My girlfirend liked it also. Sound is good to dont change it.

ha, looks like I should have two downloads: "louder" and "normal." All you deaf people around here...
 
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