Blackveiled
Formerly, Ban-Lord
- Reaction score
- 157
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This pain left with me, keeps growing
you constantly stand there, keep breaking
this soul that you've left behind
So come on over here and help this broken soul,
forget what the others say, purge my scars you've
left
Remember the ways it used to be, when we
were unbroken and never doubtful, always healing
each other, but now that has faded away,
all that is left is pain, and it keeps growing
this soul keeps breaking, the one you left behind
So come on over here and help this broken soul,
forget what the others say, purge my scars you've
left
All this time you've been standing there, watching
over my asphyxiated corpse, you stand there. Purge
these scars.
I could use some advice on this little song I wrote, It is a death metal song that I am working on. I'm pretty much a screaming vocalist.