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First poetry of any sort.. It was kind of spontaneous, and inspired by a blister I got from drumming..
Since this is pretty much my first poem(or song, that's what it's meant to be), I welcome all levels of critique, as long as they're helpful..
Edit:
I just wrote some more stuff. Check them out on my dA: [link]
Since this is pretty much my first poem(or song, that's what it's meant to be), I welcome all levels of critique, as long as they're helpful..
the pain, held deep within
tearing me apart, again and again
oh god i swear its bound to burst
with every pulse, getting worse and worse
and now i just don't know
what to do, or where to go
and every single time i try and hide it
i just don't know
how to fight it
hour's past, from then to now
watch it go, up and down
pills and drugs
wont do the trick
just sit down
and watch the time tick
and now i just don't know
what to do, or where to go
and every single time i try and hide it
i just don't know
how to fight it
and how can it be so real
yet only my emotions i can feel
and what if this is all a dream
you and me, just a dream..
Edit:
I just wrote some more stuff. Check them out on my dA: [link]