[Cinematic] Into the Heart of Darkness

[Dakho]

This is the first cinematic I've submitted here. I'm intending it to be an opener/preview for a series of cinematics to come.
I would love to hear your thoughts/comments/suggestions on it.

I would post screenshots but my computer's being mean right now.


http://files.filefront.com/Map+Cinematic+Battlew3x/;10140736;/fileinfo.html

 

[PurgeandFire]

Attach the file or upload it to file-front etc.

Currently, it leads to the yahoo page.

 

[Dakho]

It's fixed now, so it's ready to watch.

 

[PurgeandFire]

Hm... Not bad. Some cameras could be more better transitioned for an overview of the fight. And maybe have the units more spread out so each unit is attacking.

Add some more effects to the scene, so it doesn't seem like a regular fight. Maybe a sky too

I think it could use some background info or something though, because it is kind of hard to tell what is happening and why.