First Flash Movie EVER!

[Jo.O]

First Flash clip I ever made. Tell me what you think.
I know it "shakes" alot

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j22/Bonna2/4.swf

(I added the "Looks like crap" vote incase you don't have a dog.)

 

[Jindo]

It's ok for a first, here's some tips:

At the bottom of the timeline, you see 3 buttons with blue/white squares in them, clicking the first one enables you to see the previous frames, thus, getting the positioning of the next frame more accurate .

When drawing blood, you should make it looki like a bang and stay there, make it spurt and stuff (aim for as realistic as you can, it looks better then ).

Also, sorry if this brings you down, but the fact that Merchrris (sp? sry) voted best thing ever isn't an accurate vote, sure it's a good first, but the fact that it is your first emphasises the bad parts of it.

But so far so good, I can see you're gonna get a good drawing style going .


~Jindo

 

[Jo.O]

Thanks for the tip. Working on a new one right now. Stay tuned.

 

[corvusHaunt]

Any my dog is dead....

 

[Jo.O]

AK-47 vs. Wheelchair man
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j22/Bonna2/2.swf

New one
Viewer Discretion is Advised... <3

 

[Jindo]

The spurting is slightly more realistic and spurty, I also see you used the "Onion Skin" (name of first tip I showed you).

Still, getting alot better, 5.7/10 .

~Jindo

 

[w/e]

The frames are moving out of place all the time.
BTW, is it possible to make the frames stay in one place from frame to frame?

 

[sqrage]

The frames are moving out of place all the time.
BTW, is it possible to make the frames stay in one place from frame to frame?

F6 instead of F7

 

[mixmax2]

Everyone's first flash is bad, it just has to be that way.

 

[w/e]

Not mine.
Well, actually, that wasn't my first flash.
....My first one blew....
My second one was ok.
My third one was that loader. My 4th one was the second loader.
I've made four flashes.

 

[Zero R.]

I can't decide.

I have two dogs, you see. Now... which one could do flash again?

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Anyway, it's good for yur first flash. My first flash was a ball going in a line. I never knew how to use tweens there and made the mistake of putting the ball and the line in the same layer. Tsk Tsk.

 

[Jo.O]

Fight!

 

[Zero R.]

They disappeared in one frame...

And it be too choppy. Try raising the FPS to 24 or something.

 

[Jindo]

They disappeared in one frame...

And it be too choppy. Try raising the FPS to 24 or something.

Same from me, any fps bigger than 20 will make it run smoother (but you'd have to make it longer).

But you're getting better .

~Jindo