MYM Wallpaper

[WolfieeifloW]

I was bored today and since I love Clan MYM I threw a wallpaper together.
Here's the result:

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Constructive criticism/feedback is very welcomed.

...threw...together.

The only part that was copy and pasted was the demon logo itself.
The only reason I copied this part is because I have respect for them and didn't want to tamper with their logo.

The rest is all by me.

 

[Whitesock]

Your colors are too flat. Add some value to them so they have some form!

The grayscale doesn't fit very well among the high saturation of the red and blue. I would recommend adding a bit of color to the gray to make it fit better.

 

[Jimpy]

The demon is showing some white outlines. Since he has a black outline though and is on black, you might get away with adding inner glow, making it normal and black.

Also, as Whitesock said, the colours are very flat and could use a bit of shading or gradients for improved depth.

I personally don't like the displaced bits on the text that make it look scratchy and rough, because their little red and white dots on a black background, and its a semi eye-sore contrast.

 

[WolfieeifloW]

Thanks for the criticism guys.
If I get around to editing it one day I'll definitely repost the new version !

+rep.

 

[Whitesock]

I would like to see a new version, as this has some good ideas that just need improvement.

 

[FireCat]

I don't know really! it looks good but at the same time.. something should not be there.

Well let see the other one..