Need Hero Stories

[Kikac_NNGK]

Hi. Im makin an AOS map and have a lot of heroes, but as im very busy with the map making and so :thdown:in making stories, i need someone who will help me with them. I would give u more information, but cos there r 42 heroes or more i cant put whole that in this thread. If u want to help me just email me @ [email protected]
There i'll give u more informations.
The helpers will recive +rep and credits in my map


EDIT: The Red Heroes are done. I mean i dont need more stories for them

 

[Sajberhippie]

Post a few heroes and I'll see what I can come up with. I'm not much for using mail, though. I'm an old P'n'P player, so I'm pretty good at making character backgrounds. Except they are usually too long. Huh.

Well, get a few up here and I'll try to come up with something!

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

ok i made screenshots from 5 heroes here they are:

Knight

Wizzard

Wolf Lord

Skeletal Warrior

Wendigo

 

[sjakie]

I'm proud to be able to say my imagination is above average. If you give me a heroes name, model, and skillset, I can try to make a fitting story out of them for you.

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

The 5 heroes are enough for a begining. Ok here are the spells


Knight - Strength
1) Holy Healing - Heals the targeted ally unit and damages the targeted enemy unit
2) Knight's Bless - Increases the hero's move speed (passive)
3) Power of the sword - Knockbacks the units in area (this is exactly like a Knockback missle, i think u understood)
4) Don't have any idea yet

Priest (i changed from Wizzard to Priest) - Intelligence
1) Mana Wisdom - Damages the attacked (or targeted) unit x mana of the Priest (Auto-Cast like fire arrows)
2) Mass Invisibility - Makes all alied heroes invisible picked in the targeted area
3) Mana Regeneration - Restores a value of mana when priest kills a unit
4) God's Mercy - Heals all alied heroes in entire map

Wolf lord - Intelligence
1) Summon Wolves - Summons wolves
2) Wolf's Bite - Orders a wolf to attack the targeted enemy unit and with that deals a value of damage
3) From Dusk Till Dawn - Turns into melle hero (Turn On/Off; It can be cast only at night)
4) Terrify Howl - Decreases the damage of all enemy heroes in entire map

Wendigo - Intelligence
1) Breath of frost - I guess u can imagine what the spell does
2) Winter Skin - Strongs his skin and takes less damage
3) Frost Leap - The spell is leap which slows the nearby enemy units on the rising and landing point
4) Ice Wall - Creates a wall of ice that slows the moving through enemy units move and attack speed

Skeletal Warrior - Strength
1) Carrior Swarm - The name tells everything
2) Life Steal - This one too
3) Critical Strike - So and this one
4) Don't have...

 

[HydraRancher]

A note 2 u:
Dont Bold them and then make them really BIG
otherwise you get something ugly:
Strength

Skeletal Warriors ultimate should be animate dead

 

[sjakie]

Some more background information on your maps theme would be great as well. After all, a heroes story has to fit the maps lore. Take DotA, for an example. Every heroes story is based around a large war between the lich kings forces and the sentinel. Does your map have a theme like that?

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

Well...in my map there r Naga and Orc races. The battlefield is called The Ice Infernal Land. The boss is the Ice Infernal (i mean like Roshan). The map is called Legendary Combat.

The war started when Naga creatures killed the mighty warloc Drak'thul. Now orcs are comin for revenge. The war is between the Naga Alliance and the Orcish Clan (this is an execption from the story of my map)

Just to know the Knight, Skeletal Warrior and the Priest will be on the Naga's side and the Wolf Lord and Wendigo will be on Orc's side. Hope these informations will help u more

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

A note 2 u:
Skeletal Warriors ultimate should be animate dead

Btw i already has an ulti for him. Its called battle thirst and it increases damage of the skeleton x his current health points

 

[sjakie]

Alright then, I'll give it a go. They are a little basic, but hey, I can always improve them later when I get to see more of your map:

Knight
The need for reinforcements was high when the famous Knight entered the famous Ice Infernal lands. Following his strong sense for justice and honor, the Knight was sent by the king of the human race to play their part in the fight against the Orcish horde that threatened the beautiful lands they considered home. Using the powers bestowed on him by the gods, the Knight came to be a great aid to the Nagas ranks.

Priest
Wrath, thirst for revenge, strong feelings were awakened inside the priest when the barbaric Horde plundered his arcane sanctuary, just outside a human settlement close to the Ice Infernal lands. Driven by this anger, fuelled by the mystical mana that lurked deep within him, the Priest joined the Hordes arch rivals, the Naga forces, to fight for their cause and punish those who dared to disturb his once perfect life. His skills at arcane magics became fabled, even thoughout the Orcish ranks. There are few barbarians who do not take this archmages mystical might in acount.

Skeletal Warrior
The Skeletal Warrior was proud to be one of the first products of Naga necromancery. Though the Naga race has always had the advantage of intelligence and magic on their side, they lacked the brutal force the Horde specialised their men in. To solve this problems, vile Naga rituals were developed and several fallen Horde warlords were raised to fight for the cause of what had once been their rivals. The Naga necromancers were glad to notice that the mighty Skeletal Warrior struck fear into even the hearts of the bravest Orc brutes.

Wolf Lord
What was once a proud and mighty warlord, is now nothing but a beastial shade of his former self. The Wolf Lord is an Orc warlord, sent to fight rebels in southern Kalimdor decades ago. After being ambushed by a group of quillboar however, his rather small army fell apart and the Warlord remained alone in the wilderniss. Years of survivalling, years of isolation from civilization slowly started to corrupt the titanic warrior into something stronger than his former self, something barely worth calling him anymore. Once found again, the Wolf Lord was no longer to be considered an Orc at all. Still, he proved quite usefull when unleashed in combat to butcher those who oppose his superiours. His beastial howl, his wicked bite, and the strength of the Orc he once was.

Wendigo
The Orcs were in need of more brutal power when they took one of the Wendigo from Northrend and tamed the mighty beast. Armed with sharp claws and glacial powers, the tamed Wendigo wreaked havoc in the Naga lines once his shackles were removed, freezing those unworthy of a match against him and ripping those who dared to face him apart with his massive paws. After all those years, after all those deaths, only a glimpse of his white fur makes veteran Naga warriors flee in terror.

 

[Vaius]

Knight - One of the greatest warriors of the Eastern Kingdoms, this knight hails from the New Kingdom of Stormwind to aid the Naga in their restless battle with the Orcish clans within the Lands of Infernal Ice. Equipped with his halberd, armor, and honor, he is the strongest and most enduring of the 5 Champions of the Infernal Ice (The Knight, Skeleton Warrior, etc.). He is a follower of the God of Light, Der'heilige Herr (German for "Holy Lord").

An idea for the knight, since he is like a paladin (healing warrior), perhaps his ultimate should be "Smite."

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

Knight - One of the greatest warriors of the Eastern Kingdoms, this knight hails from the New Kingdom of Stormwind to aid the Naga in their restless battle with the Orcish clans within the Lands of Infernal Ice. Equipped with his halberd, armor, and honor, he is the strongest and most enduring of the 5 Champions of the Infernal Ice (The Knight, Skeleton Warrior, etc.). He is a follower of the God of Light, Der'heilige Herr (German for "Holy Lord").

An idea for the knight, since he is like a paladin (healing warrior), perhaps his ultimate should be "Smite."

Sry but for now i'll use my spell (dont understand this negative). After the map test there will be balances and changes.

Btw sjakie thx for the stories. U r are a professional story writer. U must be very porud of that. Ofc +rep

 

[jonadrian619]

If you can post some more heroes just now (maybe 10 heroes), I'll be glad if you do. I can give an appropriate story whenever you need it. I'm always active here (not always, but every day).
I'll be waiting.

Btw 42 heroes must be already a alot for an AoS map. Just make sure they're pretty balanced and possess unique abilities.

-- Umaku iku yō ni -|- jonadrian619 --​

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

Polar Beast - Agility (Naga)
1) Power Fang - increases damage for a few seconds
2) Fire Fang - Increases attack speed fo a few attacks
3) Bristle Back - Reduces damage from back
4) Earthquake - Based on thunder clap with more damage and slow


Illidan - Agility (Naga)
1) Sword (i dont know how to call his weaopon) strike - Slows the target and takes damage emedatly
2) Kneal Healing - (Chaneling) Illidan sits and is praying and with that he heals hisself
3) Evasion - The same spell
4) Soul Clonin - Its illusion spell but donno what will do yet, but after all the spell is illusions


Earth Panda (Ottomo) - Strength (Orc)
1) Boulder hit - The same spell
2) Stone Throw - throws a stone and the "victim" has a chance to miss on attacks
3) Protection Aura - Its armor aura
4) Inner Vitality - Increases his strength permanently (Like attribute bonus)


Lightning Panda (Shenji) - Intelligence (Orc)
1) Lightning Fall - Marks a point on the ground and every enemy who enters that region will recieve a lifhtning from a "clear sky"
2) Lightning Shield - Shenji cast a shield of lightning only on his self and increases his armor
3) Lightning reflexes - Passive spell like malestorm
4) Magnetic Field - Magnetizes the field and brings all nearby enemy unit at his position


Panda Rounin (Kenji) - Agility (Orc)
1) Fire Breath - ...
2) Leap of Faith - Leap which helps Kenji to get in or out of combat
3) Rounin skill - Kenji has skill to move so quickly and evade the attack
4) Immolation (thats not the name i'll use in the map. Any suggestions?) - Burns the nearby enemies and hisself. When his health comes to some value the spell is auto-turned off and it can be casted until the panda rounin's healt becomes greater that that value


Note: If u can somehow the story of the last 3 heroes, the pandas, to start something like: The strongest/smartest/fastest student of the great Pandaren Brewmaster who died in some battle....
And for Illidan, that he killed the Pandaren Brewmaster, but u dont have to put Illidan in the Panda's Stories

 

[jonadrian619]

OK I'll give it a try. They aren't that good though..

Polar Beast
Numerous tribes of polar beasts dwelt in the frozen domain of Northrend. The icy landscape is harsh and almost unbearable to any outsider, but they are nothing to the Polar Beast, who calls this land his home. To survive, they had to kill their powerful prey, the Arachnathids and the Tuskarr. They also possessed herculean strength and wind speed, as well as a set of battle skills used to kill their prey. Strangely enough, among the tribes comes one beast, who was actually the strongest (not known by his peers) and the fastest in his tribe. It is because of this great power that the Naga recruited him, and needed him, since the Naga heavily relied on their magical powers. The main factor behind his great strength is his great speed. The faster he slashes, the stronger his attacks will become, and the more possible attacks he can perform. Now cut off from his polar cousins, he, alongside the Naga, set on a new journey for glory.

Illidan
He was once imprisoned in deep underground, charged for his war crimes ten thousand years ago. Eventually, Tyrande set him free. It was his chance for redemption, not until when he was consumed by the Skull of Gul'dan. He defeated the Burning Legion's overlords, at the cost of his soul. At one time, he came across with Hakkusen, his arch-rival. They fought in a battle in which, Hakkusen was slain by Illidan. Through time, he was able to gain new comrades, the Naga, who served him willingly. Far from his former elven self, immesurable strength courses through his veins. When he knew about Hakkusen's three apprentices, Illidan went to the Ice Infernal Land to put an end to his Pandaren enemies once and for all.

Earth Panda
The great Pandaren Brewmaster, Hakkusen, renowned for his incredible fighting style and elemental techniques, and notorious for his top class brewing skills. Veiled in secrecy however, are his three apprentices who are great warriors themselves. Unfortunately, an untimely incident took place when he fought Illidan, and stabbed by Illidan's mighty blade, and died after.

One of his apprentices is Ottomo. He was the first to be trained by Hakkusen and is the strongest of the three. Hakkusen made sure that he learnt the basic principles in hand to hand combat, and that he got along well with the way of the Earth. Because of his strength, he is fitting to be a warrior of the forces of Earth, able to channel earthly energies with his strength alone. The Pandaren were close allies to the Orcs. Just as the Orcs needed more forces, that's where Ottomo came in. He participated in the battle against the Naga to avenge the death of his master along with his Pandaren brothers.

Lightning Panda
Shenji is the smartest of Hakkusen's students, and a perfectionist. When Hakkusen insisted that Shenji should be trained his fighting style, he refused. Instead, he went for a better approach, to study the magic arts, specifically the forces of lightning. Orcish shamans and mages taught Shenji the basics of this kind of magic art. It was all that Shenji needed to learn, and he goes to perfecting his own magic art. When news of Hakkusen's death came about, Shenji was in deep sorrow, and a deep hatred against Illidan grew inside him. He purposely went to the Ice Infernal Land so that he could make Illidan pay for what he has done.

Panda Rounin
Kenji is Hakkusen's protege and his most trusted student. After years of hard training and mastery, both him and Hakkusen now use the same fighting techniques, and both are equal in speed and strength. Ottomo tried to be as powerful as Kenji was, but to no avail, Shenji didn't care, since his elemental magics are far more powerful. He has a strong will to protect the people close to him, and around him, even at the cost of his life, and doesn't think twice when it comes to saving people from danger, even his enemies! After his master's death, Kenji went to the far reaches of the Icy Infernal Lands to avenge the death of his master. He is not an advocate of bloodshed and brute force, but rather, a warrior of pure heart and a fighter of honor.

If needed, I can revise the stories..

-- Umaku iku yō ni -|- jonadrian619 --​

 

[mapguy]

Spoiler

model: illidan
class: justice seeker
story: borned long years ago, Kraddenwood was a rare elven with no magic in his blood. So, used all his childhood to train in arts of the blade and speed, when he completed 86 years of training, his village was destroyed by an undead army and he was made a prisioner.
In the jail he lived more 25 years training, when the alliance came and liberted him, he joined the forces of good to unleash his vengence agains the one who killed his village.

Spoiler

model: abomination
class: abomination
name: unghadh
story: created to be the strongest creature ever seen, unghadh was created using different parts of tha bodys of heroes who felt in battle. but, one day something went very wrong! the brain was supposed to be of a great strategis, but they made a mistake and used the brain of crazzed assassin.
in these days, the abomination is fighting for the undead cause by the simple pleasure of killing the other and get more flesh to his body.

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

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Polar Beast
Numerous tribes of polar beasts dwelt in the frozen domain of Northrend. The icy landscape is harsh and almost unbearable to any outsider, but they are nothing to the Polar Beast, who calls this land his home. To survive, they had to kill their powerful prey, the Arachnathids and the Tuskarr. They also possessed herculean strength and wind speed, as well as a set of battle skills used to kill their prey. Strangely enough, among the tribes comes one beast, who was actually the strongest (not known by his peers) and the fastest in his tribe. It is because of this great power that the Naga recruited him, and needed him, since the Naga heavily relied on their magical powers. The main factor behind his great strength is his great speed. The faster he slashes, the stronger his attacks will become, and the more possible attacks he can perform. Now cut off from his polar cousins, he, alongside the Naga, set on a new journey for glory.

Illidan
He was once imprisoned in deep underground, charged for his war crimes ten thousand years ago. Eventually, Tyrande set him free. It was his chance for redemption, not until when he was consumed by the Skull of Gul'dan. He defeated the Burning Legion's overlords, at the cost of his soul. At one time, he came across with Hakkusen, his arch-rival. They fought in a battle in which, Hakkusen was slain by Illidan. Through time, he was able to gain new comrades, the Naga, who served him willingly. Far from his former elven self, immesurable strength courses through his veins. When he knew about Hakkusen's three apprentices, Illidan went to the Ice Infernal Land to put an end to his Pandaren enemies once and for all.

Earth Panda
The great Pandaren Brewmaster, Hakkusen, renowned for his incredible fighting style and elemental techniques, and notorious for his top class brewing skills. Veiled in secrecy however, are his three apprentices who are great warriors themselves. Unfortunately, an untimely incident took place when he fought Illidan, and stabbed by Illidan's mighty blade, and died after.

One of his apprentices is Ottomo. He was the first to be trained by Hakkusen and is the strongest of the three. Hakkusen made sure that he learnt the basic principles in hand to hand combat, and that he got along well with the way of the Earth. Because of his strength, he is fitting to be a warrior of the forces of Earth, able to channel earthly energies with his strength alone. The Pandaren were close allies to the Orcs. Just as the Orcs needed more forces, that's where Ottomo came in. He participated in the battle against the Naga to avenge the death of his master along with his Pandaren brothers.

Lightning Panda
Shenji is the smartest of Hakkusen's students, and a perfectionist. When Hakkusen insisted that Shenji should be trained his fighting style, he refused. Instead, he went for a better approach, to study the magic arts, specifically the forces of lightning. Orcish shamans and mages taught Shenji the basics of this kind of magic art. It was all that Shenji needed to learn, and he goes to perfecting his own magic art. When news of Hakkusen's death came about, Shenji was in deep sorrow, and a deep hatred against Illidan grew inside him. He purposely went to the Ice Infernal Land so that he could make Illidan pay for what he has done.

Panda Rounin
Kenji is Hakkusen's protege and his most trusted student. After years of hard training and mastery, both him and Hakkusen now use the same fighting techniques, and both are equal in speed and strength. Ottomo tried to be as powerful as Kenji was, but to no avail, Shenji didn't care, since his elemental magics are far more powerful. He has a strong will to protect the people close to him, and around him, even at the cost of his life, and doesn't think twice when it comes to saving people from danger, even his enemies! After his master's death, Kenji went to the far reaches of the Icy Infernal Lands to avenge the death of his master. He is not an advocate of bloodshed and brute force, but rather, a warrior of pure heart and a fighter of honor.

The Illidan and the Pandas stories are great, only the Ottomo's first part of the story is i think kinda big. Also the story for the Polar beast is kinda big too and i dont want the archaid and tuskarr in the story cos i got them like heroes. Hope u can edit that stories?

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

Ok here are new heroes

Kael - Intelligence (Naga)-Ranger
1) Rain of Fire - Creates meteors at the targeted point (non-channeling)
2) Explosion - Explodes the targeted area and damages nearby enemy units
3) Fusion Kael - Whem this spell is learnt, i cr8 2 spells. Poison and Fire Kael.
4) Phoenix Morph - Morphs into phoenix

Wolfrider - Strength (Orc)
1) Enshare - Enshares the targeted enemy unit
2) Howl - Like howl of terror
3) Hearth of the Wolf - This is passive ability that gives him more attack speed
4) Going Mad - The wolfrider turns into an angry wolfrider who has critical strike (based on Metamorphosis)

Crypt Lord - Agility (Naga)-Ranger
1) Pulling Web - Puls the targeted enemy unit to the position of the Crypt
2) Crypt's Seeds - Creates a web balls at the targeted point for exploring the map
3) Attack Frenzy - Passive ability which on every 3 second the Crypt Lord attackes twice
4) Paralazing Bite - Bites the targeted unit and with that he reduces his move and attack speed

Rock Golem - Strength (Orc)
1) War Stomp - Same as the basic spell
2) Bash - Chance to bash the unit
3) Vitality - On every killed unit the Rock golem gains his max strength
4) Hunger - Eats an ally non-hero unit to heal hisself

Goblin Shreder - Strength (Orc)
1) Chainsaw strike - Damages the targeted unit and reduces his movement speed
2) Burning Eye - Burns the trees to reveal the map
3) Critical Strike - ...
4) Roar of Strength - Picks every unit at his position and gains strength (not permanently) x picked unit

Scorpion King - Intelligence (Orc)-Ranger
1) Storm of Dust - Creates a storm of dust and while its in 1 of those dusts he becomes invisible
2) Bloodlust - Bloodlust but it can be casted only to him
3) Envenomed Tail - Takes damage over time and slows the target's movement speed (passive)
4) Venom Strike - Hurls a poison on the targeted unit which takes damage in seconds

 

[Kikac_NNGK]

No more stories?? Pls write sth!!PLSS

 

[RoarMan]

Kael - Intelligence (Naga)-Ranger
Kael was once considered the herald of the high elves, being trained in the highest sanctum of the Arcane Academy, learning the secrets of magic. He was also of royal bloodline, soon becoming king of the High Elves. But after the Scourge's attack on Quel'Thalas, he was never the same. He became blind with rage, seeking avenge his fallen people. He discovered the Tomb of Sargeras within a remote island, and the Dark Titan promised him immense power in return for Kael's servitude. Without hesitation, Kael accepted and his body was twisted and corrupted, turning him from Elve to Naga, a serpent like creature who stalks the water. Kael now reeks vengance on all who threaten the High Elves.

I'd do some more but I'm constraint for time :/

And good luck with your AoS.