Nigerianrulz
suga suga how'd you get so fly?
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- 198
Just wondering i have this short story which was composed for a school assessment and its limited to 750 words, can i still submit that .
I told Geoff to join, so maybe...
I'll try!
~Hai-Bye-Vine~
You guys are full of excuses.
and possibly an article of my clothing.
:O I like it. It's a lot of intensity for that few 10 seconds, I think the killing part with the blood could've been stretched out a bit more. Like you have 3/4 of a paragraph just showing 5 seconds of thought, then it suddenly switches to quickly two sentences for the murdering part.
~Hai-Bye-Vine~
I was reading these. I was expecting one member to come on top, but I was surprised by Dakho's amazing story-telling abilities. He captivated me and took me on this wild ride. It was amazing, and his raw talent made it hard to make a final decision. But here are the winners.
1st - Genkora
You're very professional in your story-telling abilities. This aspect won you the prize. Good job! Keep working on your English though.
2nd - Dakho
Your story surprised me. You have a lot of raw talent, but you need more experience.
3rd - thewrongvine
Your story was very entertaining, yet it got a bit dull. You also made a few grammatical mistakes. Better luck next time.
Thank you all for competing!
Genkora may pick a theme for the next contest. If three people do not join the next contest then the string of short story contests will come to a halt.