Diary Of Fred Belvon

CaptDeath

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wow this is what you were writing
very intresting but too F___ed up for my tastes
i like how the picture is whats happening to him like a scifi movie i saw
 

thewrongvine

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That was sad. In short, his life sucks. :D

There were like, not a lot, but noticeable grammatical errors there. Mostly like just messed up, tiny ones. Like with the apostrophe with "can't" and "don't" and "I'm". Medel is spelled "Medal" with an "A". :p

Other than that, it was great. Very depressing... but good. :) :thup:

~Hai-Bye-Vine~
 
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