Seraphim, Chapter 1

[Fatmankev]

Yo, haven't been here in a while... but, had some free time, so I thought I'd post a story I've started to see if anyone finds it interesting. Rock on, brothers, hope you enjoy it.

Also, I'd love to stick my story in spoilers, but I can't seem to find them anymore... oh well. If you've got 20 minutes or so, go ahead and take a gander at it for me. It's 7 pages or so, and if you don't get into it in the first page or two then feel free to stop; if that's the case, it ain't worth readin' =P

Genre: Fantasy

 

[Ninva]

I miss you and your stories. Great job, Fatmankev. I do recommend another read through. There are a few minor mistakes, but other than that, it's a work of art.

 

[thewrongvine]

I miss you and your stories.

Same, :O
Reading your story made me dizzy for some reason, maybe it's too early, ha.
Haven't seen you for some time, and you were always awesome, but didn't know you had this in you. Great story, I do find it interesting.
You gonna' continue it?

 

[Fatmankev]

Nice to see both of you still here =]

I've been trying to figure out exactly how to continue it as it's written in a way that will fit the rest of the plot, as it is in my mind. I tend to have a problem with starting a story before I really piece together the finer aspects of it; I just get an idea that I really like and it begins to evolve, and I feel compulsed to put it on paper before I truly know what I'm writing. But then again, I'm sure half of us have that same problem! = D

Anywho, thanks for reading it, fellas. I appreciate you takin' the time!

 

[Syndrome]

Great story introduction, I liked it quite a bit.
However, I find the names hard to pronounce or connect, so it's hard to remember what was what. Maybe that's just me xD
Write more of this!