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I tried to write a song.. I'm not so sure if I'm satisfied with it yet but I'd love for some opinions.
Thanks.
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[Untitled]
Days have gone by.
Theres still something there.
Theres a chemistry between us..
Even if only one can see.
Theres a chemistry between us..
Just waiting for us to see.
Wrong words may come toward us..
But who says we need them.
Wrong words come toward us..
But who says we need them.
I wish for just one more day.
To make each day a better time.
We have to fight for what we want.
We have to live for the end.
I know your still there.
I just haunt your dreams.
I need you like water in my lungs.
But we all know that.
Your not alone boy.
No, no, no, your not alone.
My boy your missing everything.
I wish for just one more day
To show you the love in this.
This is not the end
Ooooh no its not the end.
You'll soon realize boy..
You need me.
You'll need me.
Like water in your lungs.
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here's another i tried to write..
[Goodbye Love]
It's time to breath
Time to see.
Time to be a new me.
With all the past regrets.
This is the least thing to worry about.
My heart is stuck with you but my mind is else where.
Ooooh..
You could never see a better me.
How much of a lose that is for you now.
For the first time in months I can breath.
I couldn't give you a reason to stay.
No, no reason for you today.
You should of listened to me.
It was wrong all along to stay.
You where my love that day.
But today that has changed.
You where my love that day.
But oooh no not today.
Ooooh..
You could never see a better me.
How much of a lose that is for you now.
For the first time in months I can breath.
You'll never know the true meaning.
The meaning to be loved and to love.
No you won't know
You won't know how.
To feel releaved.
To breath.
To be me.
Thanks.
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[Untitled]
Days have gone by.
Theres still something there.
Theres a chemistry between us..
Even if only one can see.
Theres a chemistry between us..
Just waiting for us to see.
Wrong words may come toward us..
But who says we need them.
Wrong words come toward us..
But who says we need them.
I wish for just one more day.
To make each day a better time.
We have to fight for what we want.
We have to live for the end.
I know your still there.
I just haunt your dreams.
I need you like water in my lungs.
But we all know that.
Your not alone boy.
No, no, no, your not alone.
My boy your missing everything.
I wish for just one more day
To show you the love in this.
This is not the end
Ooooh no its not the end.
You'll soon realize boy..
You need me.
You'll need me.
Like water in your lungs.
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here's another i tried to write..
[Goodbye Love]
It's time to breath
Time to see.
Time to be a new me.
With all the past regrets.
This is the least thing to worry about.
My heart is stuck with you but my mind is else where.
Ooooh..
You could never see a better me.
How much of a lose that is for you now.
For the first time in months I can breath.
I couldn't give you a reason to stay.
No, no reason for you today.
You should of listened to me.
It was wrong all along to stay.
You where my love that day.
But today that has changed.
You where my love that day.
But oooh no not today.
Ooooh..
You could never see a better me.
How much of a lose that is for you now.
For the first time in months I can breath.
You'll never know the true meaning.
The meaning to be loved and to love.
No you won't know
You won't know how.
To feel releaved.
To breath.
To be me.