I'd say 3/5 on both of them, you're kinda just saying how it is and there's nothing wrong with your writing skills, but you need to see further and think deeper. Make others think. You tell me how it is nothing more. And everyone want more, don't they?
You should start learning "now". Don't say, "Hey, I'll go to college, and then learn how to write music... and", wrong.
If you want to do something in the future, plan and study for it now. Ask your parents for a voice teacher, or some sort of music teacher that will teach you how to read music. It'll be a lot of work, unless you're a complete natural...
Anyways, it's always a smart idea to start studying today.
So mainly just the heavier things that jut out? I'm planning on pulling out the SSD's too and anything that I don't have well secured. I'll probably be good leaving the motherboard and PSU screwed in there though if I bundle it up?
Yeah, I'd expect those to be fine. It's mainly the heavy stuff that is also long/tall where dropping the case would cause it to exert a ton of force on the mount. The motherboard will be fine screwed into the board unless the case itself is somehow severely damaged.