No disrespect intended. It was a hilarious match to watch and as I stated, I am aware that not everyone is totally pro at the game, especially when it's just been out for about a month. Also, that's why I put it in spoilers. I hope you didn't get too insulted, that was not my intention
You could work on producing more drones and scouting a bit more, your first overlord could have been great for seeing what unit's he has. A lot of the times you go for early zerglings but you don't use them, if you send them at their base, you could do a bit of damage even if you just hit a probe or two and as a plus you get to scout. They also spend a bit more time defending as well.
Secondly, when attacking, try to get an overseer for vision, it lets you see stealth, up cliffs, etc. You had enough roaches to kill a couple of colossus but they couldn't see up the hill. Also if anytime someone walls in, a couple banelings will do the trick
But most important, get more drones! Money = Units! Units = Win!
You Still need some unit balancing help? <<Managed to *balance* Custom Hero Arena, with over 800,000,000 possible builds... I have a little spare time and can help if you still need it.
I do know this - xenforo dropped the ball by not keeping the vbulletin reputation comments as a feature. The loss of the Reputation comments data when we switched to Xenforo really was the death knell for the site when it came to all the users that left. I know I missed it so much and I got way less interested in the site when that feature was gone and I run the site.
I'm on a page about incorrect corrections, and spent the better part of like two hours trying to get someone to understand that -5^2 = -25, not 25, and then that post had comments get reposted because that group is self sustaining, and that person was in turn trying to explain what I just explained to them. And I'm taking that as a victory