Zakyath
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I've been recording a song and came to the conclusion that the lyrics had to be done all over again. So I wrote a first verse and a chorus - since I put a lot of effort into it, I don't want to continue with it if it's no good. So tell me what you think of the style, or just the piece in general.
I find myself taking a shot again,
For an ephemeral panacea to obliterate the anguish.
Though the exultation is volatile,
It’s the only way I know to submit,
When the sun seems as it’s lost its shine.
As if god had set his mind to rid this world of sin again,
I can feel the flood rushing in, washing away all that I’ve ever been.
I find myself taking a shot again,
For an ephemeral panacea to obliterate the anguish.
Though the exultation is volatile,
It’s the only way I know to submit,
When the sun seems as it’s lost its shine.
As if god had set his mind to rid this world of sin again,
I can feel the flood rushing in, washing away all that I’ve ever been.