[Poet]Goal

[Draphoelix]

[Poetry]Goal

The harder it is to get,
The more you want it,
When you finnaly got it,
You want another thing,

A challenge has appeared, like a rock blocking your path
You will try to success, whether you cry or laugh
Though new problems you'll access, you will still eagering try
It will be hard, the solution won't be nearby
Your success is your reward, that's all you need
There will always be a goal, Failure or succeed
Something to reach for, using your soul

Stand for what you believe no matter what
Cause there is no difference between right or wrong
There are only different angles to see things on

 

[Seb!]

Nice, I like the idea. However, your comma use was grammatically incorrect. Which is fine in poetry, but I really don't think it helped the poem out so much. Also, I didn't like the use of "thing" in the first paragraph. Overall, nice job.