could use a little bit more lighting just above her, the ONE letter ruined the whole text try using Arial or some more formal font i think it might look better, but great effects, i liked the use of the red, very detailed effects :thup:
EDIT: Slight as in I did not do a lot of work, not that your advice wasn't thorough and accurate. I appreciated the critique greatly. I was merely demeaning my own work. Just to clear anything up. After thinking about my post I found it to be a little misleading.
I'm on a page about incorrect corrections, and spent the better part of like two hours trying to get someone to understand that -5^2 = -25, not 25, and then that post had comments get reposted because that group is self sustaining, and that person was in turn trying to explain what I just explained to them. And I'm taking that as a victory
I will be AFK for a couple of days you guys hold down the fort while I am gone. I will be checking in on my phone but that will severly limit me. Be back saturday!