Smoke and Mirrors

Fatmankev

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Ah, I've been wanting to post this for a long time now, and my friend finally got the chance to send this to me. Note: This is not my work. This story is written by my best friend Anthony Mucciarone. I just wanted to share this work with everyone else in the Writer's Corner because it's such a good story. So read it, and enjoy it, because he's a much better writer than I and it's well worth it. Word up.
 

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Wow, it's awesome, I really like it.

It leaves a lot to the reader's mind. Ask him what it was she did, if he knows >_<
 

sqrage

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I liked it very much, good writing style.

It kept my attention throughout the whole thing. :]
 

Fatmankev

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Wow, it's awesome, I really like it.

It leaves a lot to the reader's mind. Ask him what it was she did, if he knows >_<

She was sleeping around with another guy, to put it bluntly.
 

thewrongvine

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Amazing! One of the best pieces of short literature I've ever read, no joke. Tell your friend to keep on writing, if he does. -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
 

Syndrome

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woah...
thats a pretty good story.
i kinda caught on what she had done before i've finished the story. :p
nice one. X3
 

sqrage

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I'd like to read more of his stuff if he's ok with you posting it. :)
 

Fatmankev

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I'd like to read more of his stuff if he's ok with you posting it. :)

I'm sure he'd love to after I get the chance to redirect him back to the site... but until then, I can't help you, bro. =D
 

Snowbizzle

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Hey, this is the writer of "Smoke and Mirrors." I'm glad you all enjoyed it...To be honest, that's the first short story I've actually completed. The rest were trash, so I, well, trashed them. I'll post some other stuff when it satisfies me enough to bring it into the public eye :p
 

thewrongvine

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Hey, this is the writer of "Smoke and Mirrors." I'm glad you all enjoyed it...To be honest, that's the first short story I've actually completed. The rest were trash, so I, well, trashed them. I'll post some other stuff when it satisfies me enough to bring it into the public eye :p

Um... Welcome to the jungle, baby! :D Your story was amazing and incredible. Keep up the work.

Oh yeah, to Ninva. No one's been posting in the Short Story Contest place, lol. Is it like OVER? or something..
 

thewrongvine

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So... it IS over? To be polite to this thread, post the Short Story Contest thing in that thread, lol.

Um, relating to this thread... Excellent Story! :D I want more! lol
 

Fatmankev

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Yeah, try not to go too off-topic. =]

Anywho, my mommy liked your story, too. Way to go, muhr fucker.
 
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