lol, you threw it all away? How long was it? Well, Ark's Mark... the name is certainly interesting. The intro is also, but it seems a bit unoriginal (with all the "gift that might be a curse" thing). Let's hope the writing itself makes it good.
I. Hate. the. 48. Hour. Wait. Time. Period.
seriosuly, why make you wait 48 hours before posting stories?
leave ur 1st intro on lol, from the sounds of things, its like Code Geass a bit, where a guy gains poewr to avenge someone blah blah blah...
Well, I have the first section of the first part (It doesn't have chapters, so I have to use other words )
I am just not extremely happy how it sounds like at the moment, but by this weekend. (Tomorrow or Sunday) I will have posted something...
Although its based off of Code Geass, besides him hunting down Ark. Unlike Code Geass, the power doesn't eventually corrupt you or overwhelm you. The Power will certainly bring bad luck...
Even the title is a double meaning, Ark's Mark refers to the marking on some part of your body, you get when you make a pact with Ark. Also Ark's Mark means the damage Ark has done on the world, and/or your life. By the Way if any of you are wondering Ark looks almost like This
- WTF is right, 817 views xD
You people must really want me to post this
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Added Story to fiction press, this is the actual introduction; I plan to add more.
After about 2 hours of editing and adding notes to stuff... I realize I missed out of a lot of details I was planning to do originally and the major prologue :thdown:
(2-5 pages could be added to each segment depending if I use the notes or not...)
So editing will begin for Segments 1 and 2 and Segments 3 and 4 will be up soon :thup: