The right side of the text is waay to dark. Good job tho. I just rented Assasins Creed.
Edit: and the one pixel dots look weird, maybe you can make them more fade like.
To be honest, I don't like this one. The render is great, and you got some cool effects on it, but the background is kinda plain and repetitive, doesn't blend really with the render. The text is great though.
I'm on a page about incorrect corrections, and spent the better part of like two hours trying to get someone to understand that -5^2 = -25, not 25, and then that post had comments get reposted because that group is self sustaining, and that person was in turn trying to explain what I just explained to them. And I'm taking that as a victory
I will be AFK for a couple of days you guys hold down the fort while I am gone. I will be checking in on my phone but that will severly limit me. Be back saturday!