My Song "The Neighbors House"

[Aqua Dragon]

http://www.themusiclib.com/index.php?act=archive&id=234
It May Not Be Anything Everyone (Or anyone) Has Heard Of, But I Worked Kinda Hard On It. I Could Really Use Some Criticism On How To Improve It.

Oh, And I Made A Different Version Using Some Suggestions From People. It's Called "The Other Neighbors House". Tell Me What You Think =)
http://www.themusiclib.com/index.php?act=archive&id=236

Theres A House, Which House? The Neighbors House. No One Ever Comes Out Of It, Even Though People Have Gone In It. One Day, Your Curiosity Overwhelms You. You Enter Inside, Seeing Cobwebs Everywhere And Paintings Watching EVerything You Do...

Thanks If You Do Give Criticism

 

[Zakyath]

I don't think many appreciate noise music here :O Too bad

 

[Jindo]

Interesting <3, would definitely suit some kind of David Firth cartoon .

 

[Aqua Dragon]

...Whats David Firth?

 

[Jindo]

oh man, www.fat-pie.com Please educate yourself with Salad Fingers and Spoilsbury Toast Boy <3.

The tone of your song just reminds me of the twisted theme to them both .

 

[Aqua Dragon]

I'm Making A Better One, The Flutes (That Beat In The Background) Now Has Plenty Of Different Notes Instead Of The Same Notes Over And Over And The Violins Now Play Almost In Synch, But Are Still Different In Pitch

 

[elmstfreddie]

oh man, www.fat-pie.com Please educate yourself with Salad Fingers and Spoilsbury Toast Boy <3.

Salad Fingers is ownage. I kinda agree, his music is twisted and creepy like in that... >_<

 

[Aqua Dragon]

Well I Made A New Version Of It. I Used Some Suggestions From Some People And this Is The Result. It's Called "The Other Neighbors House". Tell Me What You Think

http://www.themusiclib.com/index.php?act=archive&id=236