I got a response on "Goat Shit". Apparently the reader hated it with a passion. This is what he wrote:
"This is screamingly awful. The writing is as dull as the content. It’s bird-eye view narrative, meaning it’s not a story taking place, it’s a story being told from such a distance that there’s not a hint of immersion in it. The humor was so dry and nonexistent that it falls into this category of satirical babbling. I haven’t read anything this bad in a long time on Dev Art..."
Now, that was rather insulting. In my author comments I wrote that I found the story was funny, and I invite anyone to join in my fun. He apparently read this first, which shouldn't have been done.
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So, what do you truly think of my writing? Should it be more emotional and exciting or do you enjoy my stale style of writing? Should I just drop writing and go into acting or music where I belong (both can bore the crap out of me if I'm not into it)?
I asked this awhile ago, and people enjoyed the expressive art. Thus I continued doing so, but right now I'm not so sure...
"This is screamingly awful. The writing is as dull as the content. It’s bird-eye view narrative, meaning it’s not a story taking place, it’s a story being told from such a distance that there’s not a hint of immersion in it. The humor was so dry and nonexistent that it falls into this category of satirical babbling. I haven’t read anything this bad in a long time on Dev Art..."
Now, that was rather insulting. In my author comments I wrote that I found the story was funny, and I invite anyone to join in my fun. He apparently read this first, which shouldn't have been done.
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So, what do you truly think of my writing? Should it be more emotional and exciting or do you enjoy my stale style of writing? Should I just drop writing and go into acting or music where I belong (both can bore the crap out of me if I'm not into it)?
I asked this awhile ago, and people enjoyed the expressive art. Thus I continued doing so, but right now I'm not so sure...