Blackveiled
Formerly, Ban-Lord
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I am writing a song right now, and it's not done yet. But these are the parts that are currently done. How are they? C&C? Thanks.
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Completed version
verse1Forces fight eachother in a neverending war
never stopping until the greater powers rise.
We're all just another victim in the fight for gravity,
once the war is won we will keep fighting until we claimed it all.
chorusWill we ever finally reach the stars?
Maybe we can if we fight hard enough.
We won't ever back down.
edit:
Completed version
Forces fight eachother in a neverending war
never stopping until the greater powers rise.
We're all just another victim in the fight for gravity,
once the war is won we will keep fighting until we claimed it all.
Will we ever finally reach the stars?
Maybe we can if we fight hard enough.
We won't ever back down.
We've finally reached the top, but where do we go from here.
Life is but a dream, these acclamations are not false,
We won't ever back down.