Genkora
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I don't suppose anyone remembers, but I had been writing a novel for a while. I often posted snippets here on the forums every now and then. After about 75 pages however (about 50 pages of the novel itself, and the rest other documents I was going to put in later), I thoroughly went over my work and realized it was going in a direction I did not like. Not to mention the work was rather poor (to me). I decided to scrap it and start over, changing the setting a bit and cutting out a lot of extra stuff which might have just been distracting.
So far I have about 10 pages, and have been working about 3 days. I'm going to write a chapter devoted entirely to the setting, something I feel will be needed as it is set in the future and much needs to be explained. I have a basic outline for that chapter, and I'll post the finished thing... eventually. Anyway, here is the second chapter (You won't like the first because it is incongruent with the second and won't be until I get on with the book)
blarg. I don't know what sort of tag I might use to keep the format right, but seeing as I didn't skip lines between paragraphs, I'll just post a file
Also, I suck balls at dialogue. Hopefully it'll get better than this as it progresses.
So far I have about 10 pages, and have been working about 3 days. I'm going to write a chapter devoted entirely to the setting, something I feel will be needed as it is set in the future and much needs to be explained. I have a basic outline for that chapter, and I'll post the finished thing... eventually. Anyway, here is the second chapter (You won't like the first because it is incongruent with the second and won't be until I get on with the book)
blarg. I don't know what sort of tag I might use to keep the format right, but seeing as I didn't skip lines between paragraphs, I'll just post a file
Also, I suck balls at dialogue. Hopefully it'll get better than this as it progresses.