Small Preview of my Rpg (Screenshots)

[BrokenX]

This is some screenshots of the first town area, and harbour, and some of the heroes i have done are in here too. Tell me what you think of them, thanks.


Heroe's
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http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y135/Broken-man/Onishi.bmp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y135/Broken-man/Monausi.bmp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y135/Broken-man/Monausi3.bmp

Loading Screen
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http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y135/Broken-man/LostLegondsRpgv.jpg

Towns and harbour
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http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y135/Broken-man/Onishi8.bmp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y135/Broken-man/Onishi7.bmp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y135/Broken-man/Onishi5.bmp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y135/Broken-man/Onishi2.bmp


BrokenX

 

[DarthTyranus]

Cool

Very cool. And slighty strange but anyway. Have a digital pat on the back.

 

[BrokenX]

Only if you could actually see the screenshots , it doesn't make them big.

 

[DarthTyranus]

yeah but

I have firefox so i just make them bigger in the explorer

 

[sqrage]

well from wat i see in the water screnshot too many doodads but probably becasue it doesnt auto resize the image

 

[Bartuc08]

yea if the screen shots where bigger i might congradualate u more, but i like whaty i saw even thou it was tiny, the villages look very life like, how theyre all compact and with the doodads , over all it looks really nice

 

[XXXconanXXX]

Change them to j-peg, (.jpg becuase BitMap (.bmp) is freaking HUGE! And they'll be the right size.

 

[Rinpun]

The only problem I see is the Loading Screen. Perhaps I just don't like bold out paintbrush

(Likes blur, burn, smudge, and all those cool tools)

 

[BrokenX]

Rinpun the loading screen, is a screenshot from inside the World Editor, there is nothing wrong with it. I used paintshop pro 7.0 to make some changes and if it was bigger you could actually see it, if you want the bigger versions i will send it to you.


BrokenX

 

[Rinpun]

Sorry, I just find Paintshop Pro a little scribbly. It looks like it took a minute to make...the extra drawing.

No, the background is fine. See my map's loading screen and you'll note it also has a background...though it's kind of fuzzy and stretched (had to make it small to compress it. It doesn't look too bad....)

BUT, the uber text in the top left corner saying LoaP Businesses is done in ADOBE ILLUSTRATOR, and it looks much smoother, at least to me, than your paintbrush in the lower left corner on your screen. It's not the fact that I made it, but rather the fact that it's much easier to read as it's a much more general font. You'd need to slave for weeks over something like that if you want to make it yourself and make it look good.

It's fine though. You can do what you like. That's just my two cents.

 

[sqrage]

yep sorry but i agree but i think it is actually good i like the fact that it looks rushed

DarthTyranus I have firefox so i just make them bigger in the explorer

hehe i have firefox too but i didnt download the zoom tool since the update

 

[BrokenX]

Paintshop pro 7.0 is weird to use, its harder then it looks to make pro perfect things so please stop making bad suggestions. Just makes me feel worse, let me guess now your going to say sorry its the truth then make some escuse up saying w/e then go ahead idc just no more bad coments, plus ur judging screenshots you can't even see (Other then loading screen), how can you give a good judge if you can't see it?

 

[Rinpun]

What do you mean?

1) I'm giving Feedback.

2) Can't...even...see? Man I can imagine that all stretched up and pixelated, the writing in the bottom left corner will look horrible.

3) Well sorry, I was indirectly asking the question if you wanted me to help you put much better text as opposed to what's in the bottom left corner. The woken and red-black lining is cool; that could just be blurred to look cool.

 

[BrokenX]

I don't care, and I never said I wanted your help, or suggestions i wanted to know what people thought(Not just you, people as in people that would respawn to my question), I know your giving feedback but im not using that loading screen plus its my map so I don't need to know what you think would look better I like to do things on my own, therefor don't state your business with me I do it myself, feedback and telling somebody what to doare different in there ways, one feed back is saying hey that doesn't look that bad ^^, example2: Hey thats just alright man, Example3: naah i don't like it, I don't need a brief discription of what you think, a brief statement(Small like examples) is fine enough.


BrokenX

 

[Rinpun]

Alright whatever, sorry for bothering you

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v455/Blake341/LostLegendsRpgv.jpg

 

[BrokenX]

Thats what makes me mad rinpun as i stated before, I do things on my own, and try to figure them out. Then you go and do that, thats just not right.

 

[Rinpun]

?

That's just something I felt like putting up. I don't mean to offend you, only help. But as I see it's not needed, that was after I made the image and put it up.

Now that I think about it, blue might look better than yellow or gray on my other map....

*Walks off*

 

[The Helper]

OK Broken calm down. You posted the screenshots you get your feedback - going off on people will not be allowed here.