Note that parts of the render/background/foreground starts to get pixelated. I don't think this really goes with the theme as it should have a more high-tech, smoothness to it.
I thought the name/title/words could have been better not directly in the middle.
Renders good, shinys are overall pretty neat, I think you could have extended them to form a partial border for neat effect.
It looks awful posted on the site, but on the desktop it looks considerably better.
However, I agree with whitesock, theres a weird grundgey quality to it that appear over done.
As for choice of render, maybe I'm being picky, but she looks like a rape victim or something on the ground looking back, kind of dirty looking, ripped clothes, tethered in wires. Its just not very appealing visually.
I'm on a page about incorrect corrections, and spent the better part of like two hours trying to get someone to understand that -5^2 = -25, not 25, and then that post had comments get reposted because that group is self sustaining, and that person was in turn trying to explain what I just explained to them. And I'm taking that as a victory
I will be AFK for a couple of days you guys hold down the fort while I am gone. I will be checking in on my phone but that will severly limit me. Be back saturday!