Seth Cross Writing

[Halahan]

Nice poem ninva, the emotion and flow was great, except on some ends where you expected a nice rhyme there wasn't one. Not huge, and by all means not all poems need to rhyme, but something to think about.

 

[DM Cross]

Xapphire has been added. Not reading anything until it's judging time

 

[Xapphire]

Oh boy, suspense!!!

 

[Ninva]

Nice poem ninva, the emotion and flow was great, except on some ends where you expected a nice rhyme there wasn't one. Not huge, and by all means not all poems need to rhyme, but something to think about.

Hey, thanks Halahan.

 

[DM Cross]

The alternative would be to continue living at home with my parents. I'm currently living with my roommate and sister, Kelly.

I prefer the latter.

In the future with more money, I may start something different, very different from what GH was. It was on the brink of change, anyway. We were turning into a gamer site. Next time, we'll probably do something completely different.

If there is a next time. We can always just put more effort into TH and expand.

 

[Xapphire]

That is very true, I respect your will to live with your sister, not many would accept something like that, anyways over time, I'm sure you'll do fine, I myself have just started college to become a lawyer, praying the works fine for me.

Anyways, yes we can always expand, I don't quite understand your gaming site ideas though..? This forum was supposed to be an all around forum was it not..?

 

[DM Cross]

I meant GH was turning into a gamer site.

 

[Xapphire]

Oh, yes, and we can't let our writing and graphics die can we..?

 

[DM Cross]

I don't really do anything with the graphics part of the site. I'm the "moderator" of creativity, but that's not my field at all. I've dabbled in graphics for fun, but the guys that go there are massively better than I am. I'm a writer, through and through.

If the art was expanded into more kinds of art, like actual drawing or painting, I'd be more interested. I tend to believe it takes more skill to make a drawing than a graphic peice, but that's just me.

I'm also the father of RP here. But that's because we did it with some degree of success at GH.

 

[Xapphire]

Wow, I can relate to your post in many ways other then considering my self a moderator of anything, graphics same idea, I choose hand creativity over knowledge of technology. I choose writing over images, though they are equal in description and skill. And once again, I fully support the roleplay forum here, I will join as soon as I get everything else in my actual life settled.

 

[Seb!]

My submission :thup:

Spoiler

The Elements

Man learns and studies
The natural world
He progresses and gains
Knowledge of the past's remains

The earth can be learned
Through work and late hours
Mysteries can be revealed
Old problems sealed

But the might of thunder
The call of the wind
The secrets of the ground
The great seas profound

Who will ever explain them?
For though man still works
Through wisdom flown
The elements will remain unknown.

 

[DM Cross]

Seb!'s been added

 

[Xapphire]

Good job Seb, I like your's a lot, same with like everyone else's.

 

[Zakyath]

I'm not satisfied, not at all, but I don't think it'll get no better so I might as well post it.

Spoiler

look in the mirror
there's nobody there
just a broken boy
with an empty stare
I hit the floor
I twist and turn in fear
was it my choise?
was I even there?

one day left
until one year
and I still don't see;
how did you dare?
it was our quest
our purpose here
together we were
to defeat our biggest fears

but I've fallen for you once again
and I can't breathe, I can't pretend
far beneath the surface I feel
a pain too great for you or time to heal
I'll take the water down, I'll breathe hard and deep
I'll take the water down and go to sleep

don't promise me while you cannot keep
a promise that's incomplete
so close still far away
don't promise me what you cannot keep
your promises were incomplete
it's tearing me apart again

 

[Xapphire]

I kind of forgot too, but the theme of the Poem is supposed to be Element or something..

 

[Zakyath]

"You may submit any type of poem, as long as it relates in some way to the topic stated above."

water is one of the elements. Water is included in my poem.

 

[DM Cross]

Yeah, I'll allow it, despite it being a huge loop hole, but next time, we need a bit more relation. I didn't think I would have to be strict with that sort of thing, but if people are going to take advantage of leeway, then I will. Zak's added.

 

[Xapphire]

Alright, I had no clue when writing my poem at first either, so I guess it's no big deal, I recommend you make a big word "Element" On the top of the first topic

 

[Seb!]

Kind of pointless to post but Zak's link is attached to one of his other posts.

EDIT:

Yes, that one.

 

[Ninva]

You mean his submission link, Seb?