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Chapter 11's been mapped out on paper So the next chance I get a good 3 hours or so, it'll be typed up, and you guys will have chapter 10 as celebration
“Good observation, Brant,” Alexander noted. Brant flashed him a smile, but it quickly died away to his mask of seriousness. “And you’re right, of course. I’m not talking to your brother at the moment, I’m talking to you. He is held somewhere. And a more important question than “why?”, I think, would be “why do you care?”” (Pinaha 2 chapter 10)
“Good observation, Brant,” Alexander noted. Brant flashed him a smile, but it quickly died away to his mask of seriousness. “And you’re right, of course. I’m not talking to your brother at the moment, I’m talking to you. He is held somewhere. And a more important question than 'why?', I
think, would be 'why do you care?'” (2 Chapter 10)
“There’s a Witch running around,” he said in a business-like tone. Alexander raised an eyebrow, his face becoming serious again. “Her name is Robin. She’s an old… “Friend” of Cyrik’s. I don’t know why she’s here. That’s what I was going to ask Cyrik. I don’t know for sure, but I think Zaris brought her here. For a job. What that job is, I don’t have a clue.” (5 Chapter 10)
w00t, I had a dream about this being posted!
the inner quotes should be single, not douable, the sentence should look like
Same thing
The Lycan rolled back, springing backward and back up to his feet, one clawed hand dug in the dirt. He growled at the Witch has he quickly calculated out a plan of attack. Robin simply watched him still poised with her one arm pushed forward. Her eyes were crystal blue slits in her face as she concentrated on her opponent. (Pinaha 10 chapter 11)
Alexander gasped as he forced himself to be conscious again. The flashback had faded away, back into Cyrik’s memory. His mind and the Vampire’s had severed their connection with Alexander even having to try. Rising to a sitting position, he felt as if the bones of his skull were throbbing. (12)
Rinpun said:Well the way the story is shaping out, this could get good fanbase outside the forum. Just don't lose the plot. I hate when that happens to most of the sequels for most books.
UnknowVector said:as?
without?
Nenad said:Wow just wow well i never expected THAT ending in chapter 10...
AND you gave us chapter 11 that was MORE unexpected
Alexander said:Corruption already has a fanbase outside of the forum. Many students throughout my school have disks with Corruption on it and many more kids have been catching onto the hype. Some more are currently plucking up the courage to ask me, ROFL!
Corruption will be taking a short hiatus (meaning I won't be working on it for an extended period of time.) Don't get worried, I have no intention of stopping when I'm this close to a very very long-term goal of mine. However, I am in desperate need of time to read some of the books I've purchased, and most of the time I COULD be using for reading is spent writing. So, I shall break for maybe a couple of weeks to read through some books I've been meaning to read, and then I shall be back to writing my own book
Rinpun said:I was thinking bigger than a school
Rinpun said:Hahaha....
You guys need to take the cartoon out of your covers. Those covers could fit on a children's book, but I don't think they fit this one